Hey readers! This is my first Star Wars chapter fan fic I have written, and I currently have the first 3 chapters published. This first one is pretty short, but it gets much better. I'm currently working on chapters 4 and 5 so be on the look out. I've also re-written all the spacing for the chapters, making it much easier to read. I do not own Star Wars! Rate and Review! I am new to the world of fan fiction and would love any advice and thoughts you have to offer. I'm looking forward to learning and writing more soon! :D
Chapter 1
Welcoming
Ahsoka laid eyes on it. The planet Shili; her homeworld. 'Now that's a thought: visiting my home. Somewhere I haven't been since I was a youngling. Yet somehow I'm the qualified one for this "separatist scan'."
"I don't know Rex." She sighed, "I know nothing of Shili. I don't even know where to begin this "Separatist Alliance Scan."
"I'm sure the locals will be accommodating, especially to one of their own." He optimistically replied.
"Togrutan tribes are known for their hospitality and kind nature towards off-worlders according to Master Plo."
"See? Nothing to worry about." He grinned. "Besides, you're good with people. I can hardly say the same thing for myself."
"What are you talking about?" She laughed.
"I'm just saying the only real social skills I have are with my blasters." He smirked. "You're too much Rex'ole boy!" she laughed again at his sarcasm.
Exchanged smiles ended the friendly banter.
"We're entering the planet's atmosphere." Rex reported.
"What's our first stop?" Ahsoka asked. "A rather largely populated village called Ariden." He relayed.
Ahsoka stared out the window. The increasingly large surface of the planet was beautiful. There were tall mountains, long rivers stretching for miles, lush jungles, and fertile deep valleys. It was unlike anything she had ever seen.
"Initiate landing sequence Commander." She ordered.
They landed in a jungle; the village was nestled underneath large looming trees filled with draping vines. Ahsoka strode down the ramp of the Twilight. With the fresh breeze came a realization that hit her hard: she was at long last home. Although she was completely unaware of her birthplace, there was something about this particular village that was nagging at her. She began her trek through the streets, Rex following close behind. There were a great many hut homes, mostly made of dirt walls and foliage or thatch roofs. Many were decorated with Akul pelts and strung up Akul teeth. They were no doubt prizes hung with pride. The most notable feature was the baskets of native weapons and tools centrally located in front of every household; valuable keys to survival. Groups of Togrutas were now gathering around, curious to know who their new visitors were. They soon began to whisper amongst themselves.
"General? Shouldn't there be a tribe leader, or someone to meet us?" Rex stated, becoming increasingly nervous.
"Yes," she noticed, "There is an obvious disapproval of our presence." Just then, a tall, male Togruta approached the two.
"Greetings off-worlders. I am Broka Tarsemno, the overseer of this tribe." He introduced himself.
"Greetings. I am Ahsoka Tano. I am here on the authority of the Galactic Republic to represent the Jedi Council."
She was interrupted when the overseer raised his hand. "I will show you to your quarters." He turned away.
"Your kindness is appreciated Broka, however, we are here merely to inspect the village for any Separatist affiliations." She protested.
He continued to walk without saying anything. 'This ought to be easy.' Ahsoka thought, rolling her eyes.
"There is much to discuss." He stated.
