The Planet Next Door
Summary rewrite: Olimar and Louie were heading back to the Distant Planet to revisit the Pikmin party. But the spaceship set them off course and crash to the planet next to them. How are they gonna fix the ship without the Pikmin's help? Let's read on.
Disclaimer: I don't own Pikmin.
Day 0: Planet Hocotate
Olimar was at his regular duty at the Hocotate Freight, when he sighed a moan that Louie could hear.
"Hey Olimar, what's wrong this time?" Louie asked.
"You know, Louie, if you were me and gone attach to those Pikmin, I would miss that planet as well," Olimar sighed.
"Dude, what's with you and Pikmin? They are nothing but tiny moving flowers," Louie complained.
"To you, maybe, but to me, they were little soldiers that'll save an 'unknown to them's' life," Olimar said.
"...You have some serious issues, man," Louie noted.
"You know, Louie. It seems like only a few days we only visit the planet," Olimar sighed again.
"We were there for three years," Louie noted.
"Look! I am sick and tired of hearing your stupid complaints about you missing that damned planet! If you want to go so friggen bad, then go!!" Shiako yelled.
"But you said once we went back to Hocotate, we couldn't go near that galaxy any further," Olimar remembered.
"That is until you kept yapping about that planet. Go ahead and leave," Shiako announced.
"Really? Thank you man, THANK YOU!!!" Olimar cheered and raced to his house.
"You made him very happy," Louie smiled.
"I know what I did, Louie," Shiako said angrily.
"...Okay..." Louie said nervously.
In Olimar's house.
"What?! You're going back to that planet?!" Olimar's wife, Andera (I'm making up these names, btw) asked.
"Yep. What's wrong?" Olimar asked.
"You only came back here a month ago," she cried.
"But it'll only be for a while!" Olimar said.
"But I never seen you since your first experience to that planet! You are not going back!" she demanded.
"Aww, come on!! What do I have to do to convince you that I could go into the planet?" Olimar argued.
"Maybe if we go with daddy, we won't have to miss him when he leave, cause we'll be with him," Olimar's son, Bobo suggested.
"What are you, insane?! From Olimar's letters, that planet sounds not only dangerous, but monsterous!" Andera said in shock.
"Sheesh, Andera. It'll be fun for them! Besides, I'll be careful with the kids," Olimar promised.
"Plus, I'm very interested in the Pikmin species dad's been talking about," Olimar's daughter, Bibi said.
"(Sigh). I maybe a bad mother for this, but fine. We'll go with you to this distant planet...you owe us a souvenir anyway," Andera responed.
"Again with that!?" Olimar asked angrily.
Back in Hocotate Freights, Olimar was halfway through with his new spaceship...although by new spaceship, he's modifying the S.S. Dolphin, and by halfway through, he just started.
"Hiya, Olimar. Whatcha doooin?" Louie asked.
"What does it look like to you? I'm modifying my Dolphin. I just need a few more days, and it'll be complete," Olimar answered.
"But isn't your Dolphin in perfect condition? Why are you making it bigger?" Louie asked.
"Well, my wife wouldn't let me go unless if she and the kid go with me...the kids forced it though," Olimar said.
"Oh...I call shotgun!!" Louie shouted.
"What are you talking about?" Olimar asked.
"I really have nothing to do in this planet, so I might was well join your group," Louie answered.
"Really? You have nothing to do? Not even a specific wedding you plan on attending to...to get MARRIED?!!" Olimar answered.
"Meh, she can wait. Why do you care anyway?" Louie asked.
"Because your plans to marry my sister, has been gone for eight years now!! You have to stay and marry her," Olimar commanded.
"I just thought of something! What if we come with you and marry on that planet," Louie thought.
"Fine, but your really pushing Miku's love," Olimar sighed.
"Also, I need to bring my uncle and my two nieces. They love foreign weddings,"Louie noted.
"You realize that this won't be a free trip now, don't ya?" Olimar glarred.
So in a month's time, Olimar finished his modification and now there's room for Him and his family, including sister Louie and his uncle nieces, and Shiako to find remaining treasure.
After the S.S. Dolphin II has blasted off into space, they were in warp speed mode to the nine planet galaxy.
"Attention passengers, we'll make our landing to the distance planet. Please fasten your seatbelts," Olimar announced.
"Are you excited to reunite with the Pikmin again?" Louie asked.
"Yep, it sure...LOUIE!! Didn't I tell you to fasten your seatbelt?! You remember the last time you forgot to lock your door?" Olimar asked.
"Please don't remind me...the ground was so cold it wasn't funny anymore," Louie shivered.
"So just fasten your seatbelt for no de sha vu," Olimar said.
"Okeydoey...um...Olimar? What does this blink light of a spilling barrel mean?" Louie asked.
"Holy crap!! The gas tank is leaking!! I knew I forgot something...I hope it doesn't get any worse," Olimar said until Louie pointed at a nearby window. At that window, he notice that they pass a nearby star.
"Honey? What's the matter?" Andrea asked.
"(Sigh). Attention everyone, in a few moments, we'll experience a large explosion coming from a star we pass. So if can calmly..." Olimar said until he was disturbed by an explosion behind them.
The explosion pushed the spaceship to another planet, burning the ship, and splitting it into 20 parts, some taking the passengers with them. Everyone on that planet laid unconscious.
That's the priview of this story. Ch. 2 coming out ASAP.