Hey just for ur info im new at fan fiction so please tell me tips(btw I really love maximum ride) here goes nothing

Disclamer I don't own maximum ride

The adventures of tawny

First flight

Tawny's p. o. v.

Hi I'm tawny and I live in mason Ohio I grew up in a laboratory called the academy that was in the woods behind kings island until I was about 4 then my parents found me and threatened the academy to give me back or the would sue so I did but not before they grafted avian DNA in to my body they said that symptoms would develop when i was about 16 so i grew up a normal kid until my 16th b-day...

Me and my friend allie went to kings island for my special day the day went fine for a while until we went to ride face off

"Hey girl u ok u look pale" allie said

"Oh I'm ok I'm probably just nervous about face off"

The truth was I was feeling very bad lately for some reason

So after we went on the ride I started to feel really sick

"Uhhh" I tried to tell allie but couldn't and ran in to the bathroom stall i then threw up and allie came in

"U ok tawny"

"Nooooo" i yelled as my back just ripped apart(at least it felt like it)

Allies p.o.v.

"Noooooo" yelled tawny in pain

"omg I'm coming in there "I said running to the stall door and tried to open it but of course it was locked so I went to the stall next door and climbed on the toilet and looked over at the next stall where tawny was and what I saw blew my mind

Thanks for the info here's more

Tawny's p.o.v


After the pain stopped my back felt tingly so I reached back and felt something soft coming out of my sholderbones

It was wings

"Omg tawny u...U..."Allie stopped

"Idk what's happening to me" I cried

"Geez u have wings" she breathed

"Yea I think I know that" I said sarcastically

"Omg we are in Kings Island still and u have those wings how the heck are we getting out of here w/o people seeing them" Allie said

"Idk" I said truthfully

"Unless" Allie said

"What"

"I will be right back" she said running out