This is my first kickin'it story so please tell me what you think,

or point out any mistakes you notice. I don't really mind flames because they help me improve so... FIRE AWAY!

I do not own Kickin'it


My name is Kim Crawford and I was kidnapped two years ago, I was twelve back then but now I'm fourteen.

As thin as could be, sense I only get fed once a week and get water from the leaky spots in the ceiling.

Its sad really, I would've thought my friends would've saved me by now, but I guess they never were really my friends.

Everyday I feel a hole in my chest and its not from being hungry, or from my beatings.

Its because out of all of my so-called-friends there was one I thought more of, the one that helped my through anything and everything, the one that always had my back.

I miss him so much, he was my best friend we were inseparable, un-stopable.

Jack.


Sorry its so short I'm not all that good at writing long chapters yet.

Please review!