Hey!!!!!!!!!! Heres another story that I made hope u like it .......
~ Carlies Fantasy~*
*The beginning of the journey*
One beautiful day, in 1964, A girl named carlie was sittin under a tree in the middle of her fathers corn field reading her favorite novel, When she heard her mother scream from inside the house. She was just about to the house when she heard her daddy's shotgun go off she began running faster when she felt as if her heart would burst in to a million pieces, but still she continued. She pushed the door slowly open trying to be quite as possible she creeped over to the doorway to the next room. What she saw she couldn't belive....
There in the living room stood a huge ewark (made up a name for a monster a huge monster) and in his bag were his parents "mommy, daddy" she cried. "Go get out of here" her mother ordered. Just she was about to leave the monster turned around and seen her. She screamed and started to run as she ran she hit her head on the door.
The next thing she knew she found herself chained up to a wall in a dark dungen. (ok now we are carlie and and stuff that was just the beginning ok here we go...) When I tried to get up I saw I was locked up. So I finally stop for 2 minutes.. Then I looked around and I saw a skeleton ewww! I screamed I took a piece still closin my eyes as I grab it. The finger was pointy enough to get me unlocked I broke it off and unlocked my self. "Click" ahhhh..i said.. sphh... hey over her. Who said that I said Me! You baffoon I walked closer to see his face.. I was shocked to see it was a goblin. Hi I said.. im carlie I was tooken by m.. yeah yeah.. He said interupting my speech. Geeze I said so... he said im Korkia can u free me?! Sure I guess I unlocked him as I acted like I threw it on the ground just in case I put it in my pocket.. ahhhhh! Thanx! He said standing up in the light from the roof . he was green and very dirty. Hmmmmm.. he said he started lickin his lips. And opened his mouth. I saw yellow, blackest, razor fangs. He jumped at my neck I lung and broke my leg scootin to the wall he came closer and closer then a guard came in he was a nice handsome guy with blackish yellowish hair and blueish greenish eyes.. on one side and pinkish purplish on the other. He looked at me like he liked me too. I turned around cause I forgot about the goblin and I kicked him in the NUTS!! He fell over and got up w/ one hand on his balls and the other out. I remember the piece of finger in my pocket... And............ ~END OF CHP.~
SORRY FOLKS END OF CHAPTER 1 AND ILL BE WRITING THE OTHER CHP. SOON PLZ REVIEW PLZ... THANKS HOPE U LIKED IT SOOOOOOOO... FAR. LOL
~ Carlies Fantasy~*
*The beginning of the journey*
One beautiful day, in 1964, A girl named carlie was sittin under a tree in the middle of her fathers corn field reading her favorite novel, When she heard her mother scream from inside the house. She was just about to the house when she heard her daddy's shotgun go off she began running faster when she felt as if her heart would burst in to a million pieces, but still she continued. She pushed the door slowly open trying to be quite as possible she creeped over to the doorway to the next room. What she saw she couldn't belive....
There in the living room stood a huge ewark (made up a name for a monster a huge monster) and in his bag were his parents "mommy, daddy" she cried. "Go get out of here" her mother ordered. Just she was about to leave the monster turned around and seen her. She screamed and started to run as she ran she hit her head on the door.
The next thing she knew she found herself chained up to a wall in a dark dungen. (ok now we are carlie and and stuff that was just the beginning ok here we go...) When I tried to get up I saw I was locked up. So I finally stop for 2 minutes.. Then I looked around and I saw a skeleton ewww! I screamed I took a piece still closin my eyes as I grab it. The finger was pointy enough to get me unlocked I broke it off and unlocked my self. "Click" ahhhh..i said.. sphh... hey over her. Who said that I said Me! You baffoon I walked closer to see his face.. I was shocked to see it was a goblin. Hi I said.. im carlie I was tooken by m.. yeah yeah.. He said interupting my speech. Geeze I said so... he said im Korkia can u free me?! Sure I guess I unlocked him as I acted like I threw it on the ground just in case I put it in my pocket.. ahhhhh! Thanx! He said standing up in the light from the roof . he was green and very dirty. Hmmmmm.. he said he started lickin his lips. And opened his mouth. I saw yellow, blackest, razor fangs. He jumped at my neck I lung and broke my leg scootin to the wall he came closer and closer then a guard came in he was a nice handsome guy with blackish yellowish hair and blueish greenish eyes.. on one side and pinkish purplish on the other. He looked at me like he liked me too. I turned around cause I forgot about the goblin and I kicked him in the NUTS!! He fell over and got up w/ one hand on his balls and the other out. I remember the piece of finger in my pocket... And............ ~END OF CHP.~
SORRY FOLKS END OF CHAPTER 1 AND ILL BE WRITING THE OTHER CHP. SOON PLZ REVIEW PLZ... THANKS HOPE U LIKED IT SOOOOOOOO... FAR. LOL