I generally really suck at poetry, and i'm not sure if i like this one yet or not. i would apprechiate feedback, even if it's to never write poetry again... which very well may be the case.

You fly free,

Unbound.

Ignorant to

The slave I've become.

"You are beautiful,"

My heart sings.

In imprisoning me,

You've somehow set me free.

Now I'm soaring high,

On these wings you've given me.

You gave me the test,

And I've somehow passed.

I'm unworthy,

You seem so perfect.

You've seen, and loved,

And now I'm free.