Hey guys its Yagami234 well if you are reading this story I just want you guys to know that this story is rewritten. So I decided to start fresh hope you guys like this version...

Chapter 1

Yagami's pov.

"Welcome to Tokyo girls!", our teacher said.

Your probably wondering what were doing in Tokyo. Well my name is Yagami, I am 18 yrs. old. The girl next to me with yellow-amber eyes with her white hair tied in a side pony tail with curls at the ends is Nagisa, she's 17. And lastly Aisu, 19 yrs. old who's sitting in front of us in the plain her eyes closed covering her light green eyes and, a few strands of her light blue hair getting in her face.

We are all orphans who were abandoned at a young age. When we started high school we were sent to a special school of music. Every year this school participates in a singing and dancing competition. So the school votes and the top three students with the most votes competes, to which you can guess we were the winners.

"Yagami"

"Huh?"

I noticed Nagisa laughing and Aisu just smirking. Then I turned to my teacher who was talking to me and i realized i was so deep in my thoughts I didn't notice.

"Alright girls buckle your seatbelts that the airplane is about to land."

"Yes teacher."

Zakuro's pov.

"Really Zakuro!", Ichigo said with her brown eyes sparkling.

"Yes Ichigo, but remember you can come but you must not bother or make a scene."

"What's Ichigo-san all excited about?", Lettuce said coming out of the locker room with Minto d Pudding already changed in their café uniforms.

I just sighed as Ichigo went to go tell them the news. I started to regret Ichigo about it. I was offered a job to be a judge of a singing and dancing competition held this year in which I agreed, and was allowed to bring a few friend to see, as long as they didn't cause a scene.

I turned to see the girls all excited and were talking about what wear, and what to do at this kind of event to which I just sighed. In that Keiichiro and Ryou came in with their café uniform as well.

"Alright girls time to open the café", Keiichiro said.

"No slacking off"‚ Ryo warned.

"Yes", the girls said.

Yagami's pov.

We were just out of the airport as a taxi picked us up to take us to our hotel. Our teacher sat in the front with our driver, while in the back Nagisa was between me and Aisu with me on Nagisa's right and Aisu on her left. As we were on our way we heard Aisu's stomach growl and then My stomach growled.

"Well looks like you guys are hungry" our teacher teased.

"Can we get something to eat?" Nagisa asked.

"Sure we'll go to a café" our teacher said.

"How about café mew mew?", the driver offered.

"What's café mew mew?" Aisu asked.

"It's a cute pink café by the park its very popular I think you guys will like it."

"Well then lets go", our teacher insisted.

Zakuro's pov.

The café was stuffed today with everybody running around to help as many costumers as they can. Minto was helping Keiichiro in the kitchen baking sweets, as Lettuce was cleaning out front, Pudding was making deliveries, and Ryo, Ichigo, and me were taking orders, handing out drinks, and helping every costumer they can.

I was just about done when Ichigo was trying to carry a plate, that had too much sweets, by the looks of it, it was going to fall

"Hey, Ichigo it's going to fall let me help you", Ryo said as he tried to grab the plate.

"No, I can do this on my own", she said pulling the plate away from Ryo.

As she and Ryo were fighting over the plate, I was feeling nervous, its going to fall. Then it happened Ichigo slipped and the pastries went flying in the air, I grabbed the nearest plate, and caught most of the pastries, but some fell on the floor.

"Ichigo are you ok?", I asked as I looked at her.

"Huh?"

"Good job Zakuro", Ryo said smiling.

"Um excuse me"

"Be with you in a-",

As I looked up and saw who it was I was speechless the plate slipped from my had, and I ran towards her with tears in my eyes and I was calling her name, as YI hugged I kept crying and calling her name.

Yagami's pov.

As we got to café our stomachs started growling harder. As the café came to view Nagisa had the what-a-cute-puppy face. The café was big, classical, and lots of pink, Aisu sighed heavy since she isn't a very fan of the color pink. As we walked inside there was a lot of people. Then we heard a crash but everybody was like 'nothing bad'.

As people left because it was too full we got further to the front.

"Why is this taking forever!", Nagisa whined.

"Why don't we go to another café?", our teacher suggested.

"No, were already here, plus people are leaving so we might get a table soon", Aisu said.

As we got to the stand were the menus were, we noticed there wasn't a waitress. I looked around and spotted one, she had long purple hair, and was wearing a purple uniform, she also had a plate of pastries.

"Um excuse me", I said loud enough so she could hear me.

"Be with you in a-"

As she saw me, she didn't even finish her sentence. The plate of pastries she had, had slipped and fell on the floor. her dark purple eyes filled with tears as she came towards me with her arms wide open. Yagami, she kept saying, how does she know my name?. When she hugged me pulling me towards her, I felt a sudden warmth that was familiar to me, but that didn't seem possible unless...Zakuro!

Third pov.

"Z-Za-Zaku-Zakuro!", Yagami stuttered.

Zakuro pulled back from the hug as she just nodded with her tears still streaming from her eyes.

5 minutes later...

The café was empty. Everybody was sitting at a table, with pastries and cups of teas for everybody as they talked.

"So you guys are here for a singing and dancing competition?", Ichigo said while eating a cupcake.

"Don't talk while eating", Ryo warned.

"Yeah, were staying at a hotel tonight, and we meet our judges tomorrow.", Nagisa explained.

"Oh well actually Zakuro is one of the judges, right Zakuro?", Minto asked.

"Yeah, I can't wait to see you perform", she said stroking Yagami's head.

"Ok well we have to go to the hotel", Yagami said, taking Zakuro's hand away.

"Why don't you stay at Zakuro's house?", Lettuce asked.

"That's a great idea!", Zakuro said.

"No, its fine", Our teacher said pushing her students out the door.

Before Zakuro could go to them they were already on their taxi driving off. As everybody had gone tot their beds, Zakuro and Yagami couldn't stop thinking about each other. Zakuro thought of Yagami one last time, before drifting off to sleep with a smile on her face, as for Yagami she closed her eyes and tried to sleep with a tear falling down her chin.

Well I hope you like this new one. Trust me its going over the same plot, and I promise that the next chapter is going to be longer. Please review, and let me now what you think about it and if you have any suggestions let me know.

I do not own any Tokyo mew mew characters, Nagisa, Aisu and Yagami are mine, if you want to use them for your stories just sent me an E-mail so I can approve. Well guys I think that's it oh no...

I will also try to update as soon as possible, it's because I don't have internet and I have to go to the library and with the transportation I'm using its hard so please just be patience for the new chapters, that's all I'm asking just be patience. Thank you, and again REVIEW AND SUGGEST! BYE!