anyway…tell me what you think…. (READ and then follow the comments afterward…. ok, just read!)
PROLOGUEThe water brushed over his skin as he sank deeper and deeper into the sea.
He enjoyed life when it was so carefree and there was no harsh reality to deal with.
The sea calmed his high-strung nerves and here he lay atop the ocean, able to cleanse his mind of all things that reminded him of his real life: his cold, arrogant, and critical father and his friends who only stuck by him for the fear that they would be struck by the lightning of wrath from the Dark Lord.
He didn't really enjoy scorning the others who were so similar to him, but had to put on such a façade so his father would not suspect his true feelings about the new revival movement of the Dark Lord—that it was a bunch of hogwash, and just how could a washed up wizard from the last century do any harm now with the more powerful new-age wizards who knew the times and knew the crevices of this brave new world and the paths to take. These paths would have led down different roads in that earlier time…
Yes, it was here, out in the middle of nowhere, where he could truly be himself.
After all, it had been a while since the opportunity had presented itself…
All right, guys! Moment of truth. Be brutally honest. Should I toss this altogether or should I continue with this?
I guess the question is, are you guys interested enough to continue with it? (prologues can be REEEALLY short, right?)