Ok this is my first story and I really want to know if it is good or not.
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This took a while to write since I find it hard to write stories, anyways enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A Begining to an end,
I screamed and screamed as the pain would not stop. It began only as a burning sting but as it pushed around my body then across my chest the blazing grew intense and it felt like all hell was unleashed. That is why I was screaming.
I have never felt more pain in my entire life. I wanted it to stop. I wanted to kill myself or beg someone to kill me so it would stop but I couldn't. My body was still and I couldn't move. It was as if I was paralysed, my spirit trapped inside my unmoving body. All I did was scream, scream and scream.
I wasn't sure how long I was unconscious, could have been for days but time
didn't matter now I just wanted this all to end and be finished with this painful nightmare. I was sick and tired well, mentally sick and tired anyway. I eventually stopped screaming for it did not help. I could feel my fingers and hands now so it must stop soon.
I tried to clear my mind, like when we were taught tai-chi at school, and listen to the noises around me. Distantly I could hear a TV being switched on and people talking. Occasionally I could hear someone walk into the room I was in. I wanted to ask where I was and why I was here but I knew that trying to talk would end up in me screaming. I wanted to be comforted and talked to even though I couldn't talk back; I hated this lonely feeling inside....
By now I could feel my arms and legs but as the numbness dissolved the burning stabs in my heart became surprisingly worse. I shut my mouth tightly so I couldn't scream, I really wanted to scream, I even flirted with the idea but I didn't, there was no point. –Stab- I clenched my hands into fists I nearly lost it, my self-control needs improving.
Someone touched my hand, it made me flinch. Gently I moved my hand on top of theirs and they folded their fingers around my hand. People were with me! –Stabbb- I shrieked, I didn't think the pain would get worse but it did. Everything after that was a rush; I heard lots of whispers and rustles of movement. -Stab, stab, stab- I couldn't keep myself in control anymore, I started to scream again but louder than before.
"Alice, how long has she left?" Asked a smooth velvet voice
"Three minutes to go" Replied the one supposedly named Alice
Just to hear voices was music to my ears. The pain was pushing up my abdomen towards my heart fast, it felt like I was bathing in boiling water but worse it became the more it pushed. It was disappearing from my head now, louder and louder I screamed as I could feel more of my body.
I started to kick my legs and thrash my arms about.
"Kill me! Kill me please!" I begged. I couldn't open my eyes to see who I was screaming to
"Shh, it's going to be fine love, it is about to finish" cooed a motherly like voice. Someone was stroking my fore-head, I was really soothing.
In the slow three seconds all of the pain had entered my heart. That was the worst part of what was happening to me, I could no longer keep myself sane. I surrendered to the darkness and let it swallow me. I thought I died, but I couldn't have been more wrong.
I felt no pain, all was quiet and I was scared. My throat itched like I needed water but I looked past that, I needed to see where I was and get some answers. When I was ready I slowly opened my eyes...
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