Akatsuki's Failure


Pain was all Naruto felt as he dragged Sasuke Uchiha back to Konoha. He was walking through an area full of choped tree when he stumbled over a fallen tree, not able to hold on any longer Naruto slipped into darkness not noticing the redheaded girl's face inches from his.

Four figures appeared suddenly all dressed in black clocks that were decerated with red clouds. They are Kisame, Itachi, Hidan, and Kakuza.

"Lets take the vessel and go"said Itachi

"Wait! The girl will make a perfect worshiper for Jashin-sama"cried Hidan

"Fine take the girl to and leave my brother here"said Itachi and with that they vanished leaving the avenger still face first in dirt.


time skip 2 years later


"Naruto, Tayuya, you are now part of Akatsuki" said Pein.

"Finally"yelled the two teens.

"Now then your first assignment is the up coming chunin exams and since you need a third mate I have taken the liberty of finding who you will meet now"said Pein. Hearing a door opening they turned to see a boy around 15 with brown short hair and slightly pale skin. He was 6'1'' and had the signature Akatsuki cloak on. What they found strange was the headband with the kanji for thirteen covering both of his eyes.

"Now then Creed as you should now know Naruto and Tayuya are our newest inmortals" Pein said

"Yes"was Creed's only response before leaving through the door he entered.

"Your leaving for Konaha Tommorow try to get to know Creed better he used to be the vessel of the seven tailed wolf until he absorbed all of its power. Now go"and with that the two new inmortals left to find their new teamate.

Tayuya trying to break the silence started braging abou how she was stronger then Creed because according to Pein-sama she was as trong as an eight tail.

"Aye but Im even stronger since I'm the new Kyuubi" replied Naruto only to get hit in the head with Tayuya's flute.

"You two seem attracted to each other" Creed said suddenly appearing right behind them causing them both to jump and there faces to turn tomato colored.

"Don't do that asshole how long have been there?"asked Tayuya

"Since Pein dismissed you"replied Creed.

"Hey are you blind why do you wear your headband like that"questioned Naruto while holding Tayuya back from killing Creed

"No I'm not I just dont like my eyes"

"What the fuck does that mean let us see"Tayuya yelled

"Nope"was the response before Creed disapeared


time skip konaha


Four people with head bands from whirlpool were currently wandering the streets when they heard"NO KIBA END OF STORY NARUTO UZUMAKI DESERVES TO DIE AN-"what ever else the a certain pink haired banshee was about to say was silenced when a strong wave of KI swept over them.

"And why does this Naruto person derserve to die"said the one woman with red hair and brown eyes that were currently burning in anger.

"WHY DO YOU CARE AFTER ALL HES A DEMON"Screeched Sakura

"Aye Sakura-chan but I do recall saving your life multiple times" came a voice from the rooftops. Jumping down they could see the strangers all wore clocks with red clouds and straw hats that covered their faces.

"WHO ARE YOU" demanded the banshee

"Hmm, you were wrong Naruto she is not as dumb as you said she far worse"said Creed taking of his hat off

"Damn it Creed why did you ruin the surprise,un"said Naruto taking off his hat too only to get hit in the head by Tayuya's flute.

"Will you knock off Creed before I castrate you and Naruto if you talk like Diedara again Im going to rip out one of your tails."yelled Tayuya while both Creed and Naruto paled.

" Um are You Naruto Uzumaki" asked the whirlpool woman from before.

"Ya who are you"

"I am Kushina Uzumaki. Your mother and they are your two brothers. Kira and Miku while this is your sister Akana" she responded pointing to her genin


Ok end of chap 1 now im going to set a poll for Who going to be Creeds Girl thank you and until next time