Ok, here's my new idea! Tell me if u like it or not!
SPOV
Tears streamed down my face as I ran into my bedroom door and sobbed my way to sleep. Justin, my X just broke up with me. I wasted 5 years of my life with that jerk! Then he dumps me with the oldest line in the book, 'It's not you, it's me' yeah right. As I cried through the afternoon I thought about how exactly he broke my heart, first with a, we need to talk TEXT MASSAGE! He broke up with me through a ******** TEXT MESSAGE! I thought to myself, he was a coward all along, he never stood up to bullies, he never tried to save me if I was in trouble, he even laughed when puck pulled a prank on me! I guess I never really noticed it. But now I know. He was a total **************** Jerk! Just as I finished imagining Justin being ripped to parts there was a small knock at the door, me thinking it was Daphne, or red, or even my mom said, "come in" as the door opened I was truly surprised at what I saw, Puck was standing there with two cups of hot chocolate and a giant barrel of raspberry sorbet, my favorite, "Can I come in?" he asked while balancing all the stuff on his arms.
"What do you want?" I asked.
"Well, if you really want to know the truth, I was looking forward to catapulting spiders into your door, but Daph said you were having a hard time, ssssooo, I decided to come up here and cheer you up." Wow, Puck and I were 17 now, and it always surprises me when he does something nice, but of course there was always something he would say to mess it up, "that way after you aren't so weepy, I can keep going with my plans." There it was the little bump that his niceness always had.
"Puck, the thought is really nice, it really is. But, I kinda want to be alone for awhile, k?"
"unfortunately for you I'm still your full time body guard so this is how it's gonna go, you and me are going to sit down, you're going to eat this sorbet and drink this hot chocolate, then you're going to vent out all your little girl problems and trash Justin while I pretend to listen and let you cry on my shoulder, got it?" he said in a playful tone. I smiled and said, " thanks Puck," and moved over so he could sit down on the bed with me. We talked- ok, I talked- for 5 hours until I was finally done. Puck was on the verge of falling asleep, I shook him up and he said, "hhhmm, what, oh, yeah, sure, you done yet?"
"I guess listening isn't really your forte"
"whatever, so you're done?" I nodded, "ok then, well, it's been nice talking, uumm, I guess I'll talk to you later, bye," he left the room and I walked downstairs feeling much better.
"you and Puck were in your room for a LONG time," said Daphne, grinning.
"we were just talking."
"Sure."
I walked past my sister and into the kitchen, red was eating a sandwich and she started talking to me, "you know, if you're really lonely, you could always try an online dating service,"
"1) how did you know I was feeling lonely and 2)why would I want to do something like that?"
"I can sense how you feel, and what's to lose if you don't?"
"I guess you're right, thanks red,"
"no prob"
I left the room and got my laptop out, when the search box came up I typed in 'teenaged dating service' then I changed it to 'safe teenaged dating service'
So how'd ya'll like it? Just so u know, some of my characters might go outta wack, so u gotta tell me if u think it's 2 ooc, puck was kinda, red was strang I know, but I needed some way to get Sabrina on that site!
Peace
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