3The Girl with a Frozen Heart3
Well I know you have herd of voldie has a daughter/son but I think mine will do good I hope, in this one my character feels cheated in some way because she lost a mother and now her father to the great Harry Potter. WARNING: Bashing of the Gryffindor trio and swearing throughout =]
Chapter 1
*Flashback*
The wind blew around a manor house...a little girl around 2 could be seen chasing a small elf like creature both whom were giggling, the girl had her dark hair in a two pigtails and wore an expensive looking dress, the elf wore a pillow case and some old weathered trainers; the little girl's mother came running out to the garden.
"Gwendolyn, Gwenny please mummy has just had that dress cleaned, please Gwenny dear" she said she too had dark hair but in a professional bun, her expensive pale blue robe swished around her feet, the elf had stopped and bow, its long nose touching the floor.
"Mistress Buttercup was playing with the young mistress, Buttercup is making sure young mistress is not coming to any harm" the elf says, she still looked at the floor
"it is ok Buttercup" the women replied "just making sure that Gwenny don't get dirty for her father is coming home tonight" the women replied the elf gulped loudly for the elf did not like her master for he was evil, but the elf knew to hold her tongue but the elf felt protective of her mistresses.
At the mention of her father young Gwenny looked happy"Da" she said her mother nodded
"Yes Gwenny dear Da is home tonight" the women replied
"Lucinda" a voice replied it sounded scared
The women turned a saw nothing but a flash of light and the women crippled on the floor the baby girl she was holding fell with her, the elf however held the little girls hand and apperated away a angry male like scream could be heard…..
A girl no a women aged 17 woke with a start, her flash back of her mother's murder fresh in her mind, she pushed her long dark and freshly died red hair out of the way of her dark blue eyes, she looked around the room and nothing had changed over the last 14 years, this safe house had been her home since Buttercup helped her flee from the dangers of her former home..Dobby another house elf came in, Gwendolyn or Gwen as she likes to be called looked at the little house elf who had worked for her since she was 12 and smiled.
"Dobby did you give headmistress McGonagall the letter I wrote?" she asked Dobby turn from the now lit fire
"Dobby has Mistress and Dobby now had a Reply" he said and with a click of his fingers the letter was in front of Gwen.
It said:
Miss Riddle,
On request we have taken a look at your application form and we wish to offer a place in Hogwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry to you, you will be sorted in to your House with this year's first years, on the first of September.
Hopefully we shall see you on the first
Headmistress McGonagall
Gwen smiled she had finally gotten in to Hogwarts, she looked at the photo of her parents her father smiled and waved at her.
"I will get him dad" she growled once Dobby left the room "I will finish what you started" ….
X_x ok that was the first chapter what do think…good bad ugly? Let me know please =] thank you =] X_x