Hi. Im new and could use some help. I dont think im a grate wrighter though Im going to try. But I would love to hear what you guys that read this have to say. Tell me what I need to fix. cause I have no idea what I am doing.

Name: Angelar Sidewinder

Pilot call name: Angel Fire

Age: 26

Works: U.S.A.F

Fly's:Bombardier Global 6000 Jet

Job: special protector, war zone pick up and go pilot, fire fight

Look Like: 5'7, 140lbs, built up strong, golden dirty blond hair, hazel eyes, thick southern country accent, scar across left collar bone ( has a metal plait and 9 screws).

Lives: Springfield Tennessee

Personality: can be very bitchy and or sassy and mean because of past history with family and being hurt by others. Very protective of close friends and the family that she likes. Has not had many boyfriends. Can be very loving and cuddly if she likes you. Loves to go to clubs and dance. Has a house in the states she shares with 2 marines Quinn( call name: Firstgear ) Alex (Shadowswift ) an army medic Blake (evac) and army sniper David ( Livewire ) that live there with her . There like here 2nd family. Rides horse, does archery, does every crazy thing here older and younger brothers do. Screws off around the house with them to. Drives a red ford 1995 dually power-stroke diesel, and a black 2013 camaro. Does not like to have her left shoulder touched. Played softball, soccer, and was top of the class in AFROTC in collage and high school.

Dark sky's spread out before me. Lights flashed all around my jet. Early warnings blared through the hole plane. Loud bangs rang through the air as the plane shook. I had to get through this. I had special cargo in the hold. The national congress men. I was almost through enemy air space. Another 2 minuets and we would be out and safe. The warning system cried out that a missile was coming straight at the noise of my jet. I dived hard and rolled to the left deploying chaff the missile blew up behind me metal shrapnel cutting into the side and back end of my jet. Suddenly everything started to get quiet. The loud bangs and booms faded. The shaking stopped. I put the plane on auto pilot, unbuckled and went to go check on the other people.

"is everyone alright in here" I called out. One of the men looked at the others and turned "I believe we are all fine. Thank you Miss Angelar." I nodded my head and went back to the cockpit. I radioed into the London air port telling them in an hour we would arrive. With a safe landing the congress men were hurried away to another car and left for whatever they had to do here. I stated the check of the outside of my plane. It wasn't pretty. The metal of the plane sides were ripped and dented badly. It would be a while before I could leave London. The sound of tires squeals on asphalt, doors opening and slamming with rapid footsteps. "Miss sidewinder" a voice called from the other side of the plane. "over here" I called back. 4 men in black walked around the jet and circled me. " I watched them walk around me. " can I help you guys " I said

. " we are agents of C.H.R.O.M.E ma'am. C.H.R.O.M.E thinks you are a very promising pilot and would like you to come work for them. You would be working air to ground field missions with another pilot and 2 other field agents. You would also be on the ground for missions to." " what about my jet. Will I still be able to fly it or keep it" I said. "we do not no about your jet ma'am but me can try and get it back to you." another man said. " so will you come with us" another said. I thought about it for a minuet " sure why not". All 4 men nodded. ' this way ma'am" one of them grabbed me roughly by the arm and started to walk forward. The pushed me into a large black suv and shut the door. Soon after they started to drive I feel asleep after the night I had.

Next thing I no the door I was asleep on was opened and I was nearly falling out. But someone grabbed me by the arm before I could fall. Sunlight blinded me as I blinked the sleep from my eyes. I slid the rest of the way out of the car and was pushed forward. The many buildings in front of me were hard to look at because all of them were chrome. The roar of a plane engine caught my attention. I looked up to see a silver and black jet with an A113 on the horizontal stabilizer " this way please Miss" one of the men said and pushed me along. I was led through many halls with few people in them. I was led to a door and is swooshed open and I was shoved into a small office. The door slid closed. I looked up to see a man in a black suit with a bright purple tie, red hair and blue eyes looking at me with a tight smile. " you must be Miss Sidewinder. I'm glad you excepted my offer to come to C.H.R.O.M.E. My name is Arthur Wheelwell." I gave a tight smile back and leaned across the desk to shake hands" its nice to meet you sir. So if I may ask why did you pick me to be you second pilot".

"We've heard about all the grate back ups, air fight's and pull out's you've done Miss Sidewinder" Arthur said back to me." so I wanted to be sure you would come here before I asked you to join C.H.R.O.M.E". " what about the Air Force will I still be with them if I join C.H.R.O.M.E" I asked back. If I couldn't be in the Air Force I wouldn't do it."Do not worry you will stay with them. But you will work for us for a little while" he promised. I thought a little harder on this subject. I guess it was ok I would at least get to do what I loved. " what about my jet and other clothing" I asked kind of forcefully. " we will get your jet fixed and flown here for you to use on missions and we will give you some money to buy some clothing with." He answered without a problem. I relaxed at that. I loved flying my global 6000 "so Miss Sidewinder will you join and work for C.H.R.O.M.E"Arthur's smooth English voice asked." I would be happy to work for you sir" I said strongly back a shook his hand again. " come with me please I will show you were you will be staying and were everything is.

After about an hour I new were my quarters were, the rec. room the lunch room, workout room, shooting range, sparing rooms, armory, and a lot of other things.

Arthur had other things to do so he told me how to get to the aircraft hanger. I was starting to see more people now. Most if not all looked at me weird. Had to be the uniform. Had to be I look really funny in it. I went in to the hanger and all types of jets and planes were there from small prop planes to airbuses. I wasn't watching were I was going and bumped into someone. I spun around to see a guy about 6'1 or 6'2 spin around and looked at me. He had black hair with bright brown eyes dress in just jeans and a button up shirt. " I'm really sorry" I got out quickly. He looked me up and down with a weird look. "your not from around here are you" he asked with a British accent. " um.. no I'm not. I'm actually new" my country accent came in there. His face lit up in a smile. He stuck his hand out " Name's Hawker Siddeley. But everybody calls me Siddeley". " I grinned back at him and shook his hand to. " names Angelar Sidewinder". "so were are you from"." . I'm from the United States". Both of his eyebrows roes at that statement in surprise." Well blimey what are you doing all the way over here" siddeley asked. "I had to bring some U.S. dignitaries from an

embassy in Swaziland back to London. Then I was brought here". "So do you fly or do you work on the planes". I asked to be nice. I had nothing better to do than to get to know someone here" I fly that Gulfstream G5 spy jet" he pointed to a black and silver jet with A113 on its back. That was the same plane I saw land when I got here." that's the same jet I saw land when I got here this morning" I stared at the beautiful jet. It looked almost new. The tapping of heels echoed in the hanger. A woman about my age in a dark blue dress suit walked far enough to be seen " come on siddeley we have a meeting we need to be at soon". "coming Holley" siddeley said. He turned back to me " hey sorry I need to go I'll see you around". " its fine and yeah I'll see you around" i said with a smile and walk off as he did the same. damn he was hot i said mentally with a grin.

So how was that. I hope it was ok. Tell we whats up, whats cool, not cool, need to be taken out or left. I'll work on the font for the talking soon. The more reviews the faster I post the next chapter :D