Chapter 1

The beginning of a new story brings multiple different scenarios to the plot, therefore, I ask all the reviewers to give their own ideas to what should happen in the story. Or you could DM me. I am so sorry for keeping you all waiting for two years. The biggest mistake I did was create too many stories at once, which gave me a hard time to update each of them. Enough of me rambling, hope you enjoy the first chapter of this revamped Love Story between Oshawott and Snivy.

Oshawott's POV

You know the burning feeling you get every time you work hard? Yeah, I was feeling that.

As I walked around, satisfied with the training and work I've committed myself to, I looked around my surroundings to see the mess I made.

Bark was torn of the surrounding trees, but most of all, many once large boulders have turned to smaller pieces of that former one.

Unless you couldn't guess it. I was training to become a better Pokemon.

After Ash revealed to us that he with the help of Boldore, Unfezant, Levanny, Pignite, Palpitoad and Pikachu, I felt useless. When all of them cheered, I realized something. I was weak. As dumb as I may sound. It was true. I never seemed to be able to well in battle, and come to think of it, I think Ash was straight up ignoring me in terms of battling, which only made the situation worse. Ash would literally avoid using me in battle, that he hasn't even realized where I have been.

Being weak was something I always told myself I was not. But after reeling the details Pignite and Pikachu told everyone on the team how hard they fought, it made me seem weak compared to the rest.

But that was the past, and I had the choice whether or not to do something about it. While I may have seemed lazy to do such a task, I was determined to become a worthy member of Ash's team.

However, that wasn't the only reason why I was so determined to train.

Snivy.

When I think of her, I always get that image of her dodging an attack so gracefully, something I wish I could do. In fact, I couldn't even get her out of my head. It was to the point where I stopped flirting with other females because my mind was so focused on Snivy. When I would think about her, I would say how strong she is, and how weak I am. Since Snivy was all about battling, and that was something I suck at, I'd always seem to tear up and get depressed over the little chances I had with her. To make matters even worse, she was with me through all of our continuing journey, and she saw all the stupid mistakes I did.

I think I seemed to think of myself as a burden, and that was something I didn't want nor like to be, therefore, at least training would make me stronger.

And so far, it seemed to work. In terms of attack, both my hands and scalchop were able to break a boulder with some effort, which was something only my scalchop was able to break, and even then it caused me to use all of my strength. Defence, I decided to stop using my scalchop as much as someone could just easily knock it off of me. Therefore, I need to practice in the worst case scenario. In Speed, not only am I managed to run faster than I ever was able to, whenever I use Aqua Jet, I started practising on using it's speed to my advantage. Moveset wise, I still have Aqua Jet, Razor Shell was replaced with Night Slash, Tackle was replaced with Ice Beam, and Hydro Pump was replaced with Scald. They all became sort of, stronger moves to the weaker ones I had, so when I realized how much my moves were changed, I was content.

My thoughts were interrupted with a yell. It was Cilan.

"Foods ready!" He seemed to yell.

I was happy, since I just worked out and was starving. As I walked over to them, I noticed everyone looking at me and the direction I came from. I always made sure to be far enough away where they wouldn't hear me, but if they had any trouble, I could hear them.

"Oshawott, why were you in the woods?" Ash asked me pretty seriously. I didn't blame him, the woods can be very dangerous.

"Oshawott, Oshawott, Osha (I was going to get an apple because I was hungry until I heard Cilan call us) ," I told them.

"Oh, well, I guess that's fine, not a big deal," Ash said looking chill, and going over to eat with Iris as Cilan put out our food bowls.

As I sat down waiting for everyone to get their food, I finally got up, last one standing, putting my bowl in front of him, so he didn't have to walk over to me.

"Since when did we learn food manners buddy?" Cilan asked curiously, surprised at my actions.

"Oshawott (Idk) ," I replied before sitting down.

I decided to sit down next to Pignite, who was gobbling down his meal, and Pikachu.

As I ate my food, I decided to raise my head to see Snivy sitting nearby on a rock. Damn, she looked so beautiful, with those lines on her back, the way she looks at us with those serious, yet charming eyes, and that tail.

My thoughts were interrupted with Pignite trying to steal my food, apparent revenge for all the times I did it. I looked at him, making him feel uncomfortable, before emptying a bit into his bowl, which he was happy about.

"Thanks man!" Pignite cheered as he dug into his quarter filled bowl.

"No problem," I replied, even though he didn't seem to hear me.

As I ate the rest of my food out, I placed my empty bowl on the table where Cilan would clean them, and went by a nearby river to refresh myself. I decided I need some time to think, especially about Snivy.

My thoughts were interrupted by the annoying sarcastic sweet tone of Emolga.

"Hey Oshawott! Can you get me an apple?" She asked as she gave me her charm. If she had done that a month ago, I would've fallen for it. But now? Ha please.

"No Emolga, you can get it yourself," I said with no specific tone, hoping she would go away.

"Excuse me? What did you say?" She replied with an angry tone to which I was scared by, even to this day. Keeping my emotions tight, I with the same tone repeated.

"Go get them yourself,"

Immediately after that sentence, I was met with a discharge to my back.

The discharge hurt, yes, because of my weakness to electric types, but I was able to get back up after a couple of seconds, due to my training 'hardening' me.

I looked around to see Emolga flying away as fast as she can, and Snivy running towards me.

End of Chapter 1.

A.N / That is the revamp of Chapter 1 everyone! Hope you enjoyed it. I promise I'll have the second chapter done soon, maybe during two to a week, but my predictions are usually off, so just be prepared for an update, or you can follow this story. Anyways, give me your opinion of the first chapter of this revamped story. See ya later!