hi everybody this is my first fanfic so plz give any advic thanks and have a great day
demon "i am the mighty kyuubi"
normal people chatting " ramen-sama i missed you"
jutsu " explantion no jutsu"
thought " im thinkning of thinking"
disclaimer: me no own naruto or anyother references all i got are my original jutsu.
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a young man was jumping from tree to tree heading back home; he had just killed Uchiha Sasuke 2 hours ago. He winced as that particular memory came back to him that battle had cost him much more the several days away from the incredible ramen-sama, something much more it had cost the entirety of Sunagakure and his fiance Temari.
He Had been preparing for his marriage with his bride-to-be when it had happened. Uchiha Sasuke had led his army of Zetsu clones to the village gates and had laid seige to the great desert citadel he had made his demands clear upon his arrival. All Suna-nin of tokubetsu-genin rank and up were to commit seppuku, all the secrets and antidotes of Chiyo were to be handed over, and Gaara no Subaku along with and Naruto Uzumaki were to be handed into his immediate care.
Needless to say all of suna was prepared to die that day, Gaara sent his reply voice ringinging out among the desert "Sunaton: Kōtei Suna Kabe no jutsu"* as he spoke the entire desert of Kaze no Kuni began to move towards Sunagakure at a unimaginable speed within minutes all the sand in the desert stood as a great wall surrounding sunagakure so high it had eclipsed the sun. Sasuke and his army stood on stone not a grain of sand was to be found of the wall and then the Uchiha spoke lowly to himself "Looks like this hovel has slightly improved it's self. still i the flames of Uchiha shall burn this pathetic village to ash."
He then ordered his army to surrounding the wall to charge so that he could find it's weakness as the zetsu clones rushed the walls they were crushed as arms of sand sped from the walls. Sasuke watched calmly as his forces uselessly rushed the wall forcing the Godaime Kazekage to waste his chakra crushing the pests he had brought with him.
As the las of them fell he lowly intoned "Eien no Mangekyou Sharingan*" as his eye bled red with a black formation he yelled over the cries of the dying zetsu clones "Amaterasu*" black flame then engulfed the entire sand wall before him he then started to form handsigns and shouted once more " Fuuton: Daitoppa no jutsu*" as the blast of wind hit the black flames it had created a great fire ball engulfing the village. letting the fire burn for a minute more he spoke "Time to kill the stragglers" as he entered the burned gates.
He passed Many bodies of burned people ranging in all the ages he continued to walk until he came upon a glass sphere knowing of its occupant Sasuke quickly unsheathed his Chokoto and charging it with lightning slashed at the thick glass and was surprised as steam bellowed out of the sphere when finally the steam stopped he saw a figure standing among it mouth open as if screamin eyes open wide and red from the unimaginable pain he was fealing as blood flowed like water over his once white robes.
It was Garra the man who had cost him his army and had defied him. Sasuke looked at Garra with out a feeling of remorse and looked him in the eye suddenly sasuke was in a great desert surrounded by broken chains he looked to his left and saw the man whose mind he had just entered and spoke "Gaara no Subaku the feared Ryūketsu suna no akuma* all your power is now mine all your memories, jutsu, and experience are under my dominion and now you shall perish, so is the fate of all who defy an Uchiha."
With his peice said Sasuke looked at Gaara and spoke "Kamui*" with that done Sasuke contined walking until he reached hid destination a church untouched by his black flames as he walked up the stairs he was hit by a strong gust of wind.
Before him stood Temari and Naruto ready for battle they stood their staring at each other all the sudden a gust blew be tween them and naruto put his fingers into a cross and shouted "Kage Bunshin No Jutsu*" and the burned city was filled with an army of clones dressed in their red robes and black pants a scroll on each ones back and with a unanimous shout they charged at the black haired teen.
Suddenly a shout of "Susanno*" rung out and a ethereal figure formed out of purple flames and swept its blade in front of it destroying a large amount of kage bunshins and
Sasuke spoke to Naruto "Dobe they have a saying you know it goes a little like this "fool me once shame on you fool me twice shame on me" the same trick wont work twice on me" he sneered.
"Well teme looks like i'll have to bring it up a notch" replied the blonde as he quit running and stood still "Temari-koi cover me" "Will do Naru-kun" as she jumped in front of him and started raining wind jutsu upon wind jutsu on Sasuke.
"Whats this Naruto, are you so scared to fight me your sending the wind bitch to her death, so be it after all who am i to not rid the world of another peice of trash as he brought down Susanno's sword upon the wind mistress all the sudden Sasuke felt an Immense amount of pressure on his stomach as he looked down he saw Naruto's fist buried in his gut as he broke through Susanno's Yata no Kagami, he then explode backwards hitting a buillding and easily going through it and 3 others as Naruto intone "Sennin Modo*".
So you have improved since the academy dobe let me show you just how much i have improved too". as Sasuke began to make handsignsas he shot 5 fireballs in to the air and quickly jumped to the highest builfing in his vincinity the kage tower. "Now dobe ypu will witness the power of a true Uchiha, for we are masters of Nin, Gen, and Taijutsu we are also masters of," lightning began to flash in and out of the clouds, "Nature, so now dobe witness the power of Kirin*" naruto closed his eyes prepared to accept his death as he charged Sasuke in a final attempt to kill the menace when he heard a roar he flinched expecting to feel pain but instead of pain he heard a scream.
"AHHHHHHHHHH"the scream the last thing he would hear from the love of his life as she was struck by Sasuke's jutsu he watched as Temari's burnt body fell of the eruins of the destroyed church when before she hit the ground she was caught by her partner as Naruto looked at his lover searching for any sign of life from the woman in his arms
"Give it up dobe," Sasuke spoke disgusted," Your bitch is dead she took Kirin straight to the heart, but it makes me wonder why would she die to protect whats left of a ruined building." but naruto had heard none of this he was lost in his mind a huge sewer as he walked looking for the all to familiar gates
"Kyuubi where are you i know you are awake." spoke naruto in a dead and flat tone.
Before him shown two blood red eye's as he heard the kyuubi's deep booming voice full of anger and malice "What is it human, are you finally tired of being your ass handed to you by that foolish copycat, have you come to beg me for my power to kill him."
Naruto spoke once more clearly and smoothly " No, Kyuubi i have for almost the exact opposite. I have come to demand that you not interfere with this fight, I want revenge on Sasuke and i wont let you take it from no matter what" to his statement he heard an amused chuckle from the Kyuubi
"So it only took the death of hundreds of people and your mate to make you grow a backbone, eh fine you have my word i wont interfere." as his mindscape faded away he formed two clones in front of him as he began to form his rasenshuriken as it formed he put all his chakra into it making it grow to the size of an oodama rasengan
"Now die you murdering bastard" screamed naruto as he threw his Jutsu at Sasuke. As the Jutsu died down he saw Sasuke leaning against a wall with his shiringan active just then Naruto thought "oh shi-" he was then in his mindscape tied to a cross looking directly at Sasuke as he felt a great pain in his head
"Dobe all your power that you coveted so dearly is now mine" said Sasuke
"You know we are in my mind right Sasuke?" question Naruto.
"What of it dobe."
"Well Sasuke-chan i believe it was you who said "fool me once shame on you fool me twice shame on me" do you believe this is the first Tsukuyomi* i've been in so in simpler terms my mind, my rules and so i will take all your knowledge from you everything from history to jutsu and when i'm finished,i believe Kyuubi is hungry."
" Your to kind to me Ningen" spoke kyuubi and so Naruto threw Sasuke into kyuubi's cage.
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1 Imerial sand wall- summons all the sand within a 800 mile radius to form a mall
2 Sasuke's black flame things-burns for 7 days and 7 night
3 wind style great breakthrough- a huge fucking gust of wind
4 title i gave gaara means Demon of the Bloody Sand
5 Madara's and Kakashi's dissappearing eye thing-sucks whatever they focus on out of existance
6 shadow clone jutsu-you should know this one already
7 the skeleton gaurdian thing- protects the user from just about anything
8 sage mode-a mode entered when the user harmonizes with nature
9 Sasuke's Lightning dragon- a huge lightning monster
10 moon reader a technique where the user goes int to the victims mind to torture him/her
i believe i'll stop here. thanks for reading and tell me what you think