"Noowwwwwww THIS iss winnnnnneiiiiinggggggggg!".No seriously this is sparta Rarity...now get out of my author notes! Anyway moving on,I want to get one thing straight and that is that I honestly dont care about how the characters in this "short story" act or seem. As usual if you have seen any of my storys before,BOLD is for important information and ITALICS is for thoughts.
Im going to have to this that this has been the most difficult first chapter Ive ever done,I have tried to iron out mistakes and Ive done my best,any reviews with critical insight and what needs to be re-worked would be most welcome.

Basically Im putting a something which might even be new in the land and well,we shall see how this goes.
Btw alertnate unirverse so I dont get into trouble and a O.C and songs...well some kind of songs.
Anyway time to start.

EVERTREE FORST...:Pony tales gathering.
Rarity and Rainbow-dash galloped over to where the resident zerba would tell her old pony tales and try to scare all the little fillys and other ponys that wanted to come aswell.
As always Rarity took her time and making her way as lady like as possabile through the mud and complaining that much to her friends annoyance that "going any faster would get her hooves mucky and it took five hours to achieve her most recent manicure".

Rainbow dash on the other hand just ploughed her way through,ignoring the heavy mud.
Looking back at her VERY lady-like friend,she once again snorted in disgust."If you wanted to take your time then why didnt we go yesterday,we might have even arrived on time".
Rarity replied while looking at her muddy hooves."Well Im a "lady",I take my time and since its Hearts-and-Hooves day tommorow I want to pratice walking like a "lady"

"Can you two keep quiet please,Im trying to listen"A little filly remarked,straining her ears trying to listen to Zecora.
"What?,is she even saying anything I cant hear her!"Rainbow-dash commented,since she couldnt even see Zecora,let alone hear her.

"My hooves are getting so muddyyyyyyy!"Rarity screamed despite only having a few spots on her.
"Your like a girl!"
"So are you!".
The two argued for a while,both knew it was pointless but it was something to do at least.

Well until Pinkie-pie came hopping around with Twlight sparkle who was also hopping for some unknown thier friends the two ponies came over,still madly hopping around,defying the laws of gravity once again.
Rarity and her rainbow maned compainon stopped argueing and met up with the two.
Almost instantly,the fashion minded one started to complain about "How her hoofs were dity and her mane was *ruined*".
Twlight giggeled,finding it funny that a speck of mud would send Rarity wild.
"So why are you hopping about then?"Rainbow-dash had the common sense to ask why Twlight was happily-hopping about.
"Well you know what day it is tommorow right?"She explained.
"Yes...?".
"The two princess and...my brother with candence are coming,tonight to celebrate!".She shouted,excited at seeing shining amour again.
Apparently the sheer thought of a royal vist made everypony who heard,go haywire as they forgot what they were currrently doing and instead focoused on the hetic task of preparing Pony Ville for the visit.

A FEW HOURS LATER,(at the centre of Ponyville,wherever that is?)Around a few hours later,somewhere around the time in which a royal visit was usually happend,the two sister-princess Shining armour,his wife and a massive load of guards and another pony that was wearing gold and black military insignia he was just as big as princess Celestia.
Everypony did the usual bowing and the princess did thier usual good will this time they were staying at a nearby hotel...with forcefields and 24/7security.
The group of four friends decided to meet Twlights brother for the sake of it.
Rarity was now gone for moaning and one about the current subject...tommorow.
"Oh my god,oh my god,oh my god...I cant look like a fool in front of ROYALTY,must make dress and slap makeup on my face as much as possible".She sounded quite distressed.
"You slap everything on your face anyway!".Rainbow-dash annoyingly commented. "Well I must slap MORE ON!".

The "four-some",approached the hotel where Celestia and Luna were staying. Arriving at the large steps which was flanked by loads of Twlight couldnt see her brother anywhere.
"Hmmmm where is he?"She mumered."Maybe hes in there,"with his wife?"Pinke-pie suggested.A outside observer might have thought she was saying something else.
"Nope Im right here,doing my round ups"Shining armour spoke behind them,with Cadence in tow and the large pony somewhere in the middle.
"Hey BBBFF... how you doing?"Twlight stuttered before galloping off with a smile on her face to give the captain of the royal guard,a pony hug.

"Alright,tired from flying all that way and maintaining the shield,though I have had some help"He admitted.
"Im just going to bed now,dont mind me"Cadence muttered before flying to the sack.

"From who?"The thought of anyone else being as powerful as her brother was confusing to Twilight. Shining armour simply pointed to the large purple and gold pony that was standing a distance in convosation with a squad of guards.
"He has been a great help over the past months,even when IM tired from a days work...he just carrys on,24/7,never stops never sleeps,just like that,its almost scary really.
"Sounds like a nice pony anyway".Twlight tried to put in a nice comment but her brother could see that she was lying."Do you know who he is?"She asked him a question quickly.
He racked his brains,trying to remember before he knew who he was talking about.
"That little sis" is the commander of the royal Equestrian divisons,hes just as big as the princesess and I feel pretty small compared to him".Shining armour,sounded almost scared at that.
"Why is he here then,isnt he supposed to be guarding us all?"Twlight commented,still confused.
"Apparently he just came for no reason,infact I think your friend Rarity might know.."
"DO I?"Rarity butted in,her eyes wide and open,the thought of talking to someone powerful was making her excited.
"I dont know really,but give it a go"Shining armour dismissed her.

"I dont get this"Twlight remarked,"Neither do I,we better go see whats happening between them then"Her big brother said.

"So why wont you tell me YOUR NAME!".Rarity almost shouted at the complete stranger for the second time,so far he had said nothing, his piercing eyes had so far annoyed the pony.
"Well dont expect ME to talk to you again"She stomped off.

Looking at her brother,Twlight was once again confused,Rarity had been excited to meet his guy,now she had gone,shouted at him and he had said nothing in return.
WHO THE FUCK IS THIS GUY?

for whoever comes up for who this unknown pony is.