Hello readers i am new to the world of fanfic but please give me a chance and if you would also be kind enough to use any criticism then that would be fine.

As I walked I remembered how it felt to die, I was so terrified when it first happened that I had to change. I, by the way, am Juzo, my code-name is The One Eyed Wolf and, well, that is to be saved for another time. I am a ghoul to be more specific a one-eyed ghoul I am a half-breed thanks to some stupid idiot's ingenious idea to heal a human using a ghouls parts. Oh and for those of yall who do not know what a ghoul is then first off, you are stupid and second off, they are a humanoid species which eats humans. They need only to eat one human a month to sustain themselves but they sometimes eat more than that so they need to eat less and save themselves hunt time. But back to my memories. When I first "died" I was hunting a ghoul when the one eyed owl showed and "killed" me so they had to use his organs to save me even after I protested to the idea entirely. As I remembered this I heard my girlfriend laughing which brought me out of my stupor and back to reality. I would like yall to meet Raven she is my girlfriend she is 5'7" my height and she is beautiful. I would be more specific but I am not good at describing people when they are in one piece, sorry. I remembered when me and her met she saved my life and brought me to the new Intaku which was rebuilt so that the ghouls of the 20'th ward would heave a place to go to eat. She helped me when I was supposed to die, and she helped me when I needed a shoulder to cry on. I was honestly surprised when I started accumulating emotions for her she seemed to be just a normal stalker at first then she came up to me and started talking to me for real and I was surprised when she called me cute. I then wondered what I thought of her and I honestly thought her beautiful she seemed so normal then I actually noticed her and I fell in love with her for who she is and what she looked like and sounded like, I was in love with a stalker, I am now a stalker of one person and one person only and her name is Raven Black. So from then we dated and so here we are. "What are you laughing about?" I asked "Your concentration face. The face which you get when ever you are remembering something about us, it is so cute!". I then noticed I was still in said face then went into a smile. She got me by making me laugh at her jokes and she made me genuinely laugh not many things did that so when she did I was surprised only two people could do that and the other one was one I had a crush on who I no longer can have a crush for. Anyways lets not get distracted now. I asked "What on earth do you mean? I make no such face, not on purpose anyways." I seemed to have some kind of effect on her emotionally and she did the same for me I was just surprised at how bold I was when I asked her if she "wanted to, by any chance, wanna go on a date" and even more so when she accepted my proposal of dating. I am a guy yes, but I had only started dating when I met her. She was my first true love I was mesmerized by her. And now we get back to reality.