Okay I just was so inspired to writing my own fanfiction after reading the other stories on this page. This is my first one and I'm working on the second chapter right now.

Now I will figure out how to write a short summary of the story.

Anyway happy reading and don't forget to review so I know if there is any point in continuing the story^^


Chapter 1

The man looked at the 15 years old girl who lay on the bed in front of him. She was begging him to let her go which just made him find this more amusing than before. He went to the little table beside the bed and took the knife he had put there before. She swallowed hard at the sight of the sharp object. He ran the knife over her body and in one move with the knife he cut the dress open.

"You're just a naughty, little slut aren't you? 15 and not pure at all. You're too nosy! That's the problem. You just want to explore new things. But you are beautiful, I'll give you that. You're her!"

"What the hell are you talking about?" the girl asked with much confusion.

"You are her! And so you must sleep for a very long time."


"Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed."

-C.K Chesterton

Emily Prentiss really liked this guy who was sitting across the table.

She liked that she for once could dress up to somebody. He had asked her out a week ago after he accidently thrown out her coffee at the coffee shop near her apartment. She was kind of flattered when he had said that he wanted to buy her dinner to make up for the coffee and she said yes. It was not like her to agree to these kinds of things, especially when she didn't know him.

They had talked for a long time now and she discovered that they had a lot in common. But just as it was going so well the beeping sound in her bag ruined it. She looked at her cell and gave out a sigh.

"Sorry, but as much as I love this I really have to go. Work is calling."

"Oh, it's okay. I can give you a call some other time and hopefully we can do this again?"

"Absolutely!"

"Great! Now go catch some bad guys!"

She laughed a little at his comment and then turned her heels to go.


Emily Prentiss rushed through the doors and took a seat at the round table.

"Sorry I'm late! The traffic was bad"

"I can see that." Morgan said with a grin on his face.

Emily had forgotten how dressed up she was to this kind of occasion.

"It's okay. Three women between ages 15-31 has been killed all found at different places in D.C. All sexual abused." JJ began.

"How do we know it's the same Unsub?" Morgan asked.

"He has carved in the words the end in the women's chest."

Emily looked at the pictures on the board with disgust.

"What can you tell us about the victims?" she asked with her eyes still on the photos.

"The latest victim is 15 year old Sarah. Her parents reported her missing when she didn't come home after two days. Apparently she had told her parents that she was sleeping at her boyfriend's house and when they didn't hear from her they knew something was up. This was three weeks ago"

"And she wasn't found until now? Who found her?" Rossi asked.

"An anonymous tipper."

"How did she die?" Reid asked.

"That's what we will find out now" Hotch said. "There was no open wound or internal bleeding which caused the death. Garcia, can you give us the autopsy report?"

"Sure thing, sweetheart! She was poisoned to death and there was a mark on her index finger where the poison entered the body"

Reid looked closely at the photos finding a resemblance to something he has seen as a child, but he could not yet figure it out.

"Morgan, Prentiss you go question the family. JJ and Rossi you stay here and work on the victims and Reid, you and I go to the dumpsite."


Prentiss and Morgan got out of the black SUV and knocked at the door to the dead girl's parents. A pale woman opened the door. Her eyes were red and swollen due to all the crying.

"Hi, I'm agent Emily Prentiss and this is agent Derek Morgan and we're with the FBI and we would like to ask you about your daughter."

The woman looked at the two agents a long time before she let them in. The house was full of pictures of the girl whose dead body was taped on the whiteboard.

"Is it okay if I go and have a look in Sarah's room? Morgan asked and the mother nodded.

"When did you first notice she was missing?" Prentiss asked while looking at the pictures on the wall.

"She said she would sleep at Howard's house for one night and when she didn't call back the next day I became a little worried but just thought she had decided to be with him the next night too. But then she didn't call me the following day either so I called Howard and he said that she hadn't shown up the first night so I called the police. Three weeks later I got the call that they had found my little girl in an alley."

"Did she have any enemies?"

"No, she was just the sweetest little girl."

The mother started crying again and Prentiss put her hand on her shoulder trying to comfort her. She couldn't imagine what it would feel like to lose your daughter like this. Morgan finally came down the stairs and the both agents left.


Reid looked at the four women on the board. The first one was 23 years old and had dark hair, was poisoned to death, raped several times and the autopsy showed that she hadn't eaten anything but an apple the two weeks she was missing.

The second victim was a 31 year old redhead, her tongue was cut out and she died of a poison that slowly caused her heart to stop and she was found in a bathtub filled with foam in a motel room, also raped several times and she was also found four weeks after reporting missing.

And then there's Sarah who died of a sting in the finger. Reid looked from picture to picture trying to find something more, but he was interrupted by JJ who stormed in to the room.

"A fourth victim has been found. A 35 year old who has been half eaten. She has the same words on her chest as the others."

JJ put a picture of the fourth woman up on the board. She had red hair and a red sweater on her.

"This is so strange. The victims all dies in different ways, but it's just getting worse. The other three was all poisoned with different kinds of poison while this one bled to death." Reid said. "Why are they all killed in different ways and what link between the victims is there?"

"I don't know, but we have to find this guy before he kills someone else"


Wonder if they will, wonder if they will...

Wonder what the murders have in common besides the words on their chest. I hope I'm not that obvious. Please review and you can make your guess!