Author note: I felt like this need to be rewritten, plus I have no story idea's. I got this idea while watching this Hillywood show. It funny in some parts but it's just… Wired
Chapter 1 (Rewritten)
"Mr. Todd there is some one waiting for you" Toby said as he walked into the barber shop.
"Who is he" The Barber turned around. He was polishing his razor
Toby cleared his throat, "He goes by the name Jack But he said you know his real name, strange man. He likes to drink…. More then me"
Sweeney looked at Toby with an odd look, "Your not talking about Tom, are you?"
Toby shrugged, "He just told me he was named Jack?"
"Sent him up." Toby ran down the steps of the shop and shortly after a man walked into the shop. He set down his razor and looked up at tom,
"Tom is that you"
He turned, "Sweeney is your new name Benny. My new name is Jack" he stated
The barber was confused, "What do you mean?"
"For my new Job I decided to change my name and you have the same job and changed your name" he said again
"I know! You sailed my prison ship" the barber muttered
"After that I changed my name" Tom continued
"You call your self Jack now? Right"
"Sweeney Todd is it." Tom (Jack) said, completely ignoring Sweeney, "Benny if you can hold a marriage I would think you would pick a better name for your self. Oh yea. Where are Lucy and Baby Joanna?"
"Well my dear Lucy is gone forever because she killed her self and my daughter has been taken from the judge who sent me to that prison ship"
Tom (Jack) frown, "oh, that's sucks"
Sweeney frowned, "You had been drinking"
"Yes but why is the rum always gone'
"Tom you're an idiot and you smell like piss"
"You think everything smells like piss" Tom (Jack) said
"Tom why are…" Sweeney was interrupted
"Please call me Jack sparrow"
Do you get it now?