Author's Note: Thanks to all of you people who are reading this story! Just want you to know that this is my first story ever, so even if you read it and completely hate it. I would still really love to have feedback on it, so I can see what I need to improve on! This is a big learning experience for me to see if my writing is ½ as good as I think (and hope it is). Now without any further ado Ladies and Gentleman I give you my first story!
Finn looked up at the bright blue sky, thinking about Princess Bubblegum and how badly he was hurt after her complete denial.
**FLASH BACK**
Finn: "Umm Princess Bubblegum may I please talk to….alone." (slightly blushing)
PB: "Sure Finn I'll be right there, just let me finish this…" (Her sentence started to fade off) Wait…Ok I'm done. What do you need?
Finn: "PB what I am about to say probably isn't really a surprise to you, but still I just want it out in the open…..Well you see…Ever since I first saw your beautiful pink face and smelt your sweet bubblegum smell, I knew that I was falling really hard for you.. What I am trying to say is...Well I LOVE YOU PRINCESS!" 3
PB: "Oh my Finn... umm I'm really sorry but I only see you as a little brother nothing more…And I like someone else
**END OF FLASHBACK**
How in the glob was he ever going to get over that! He got denied because she thought him as a LITTLE BROTHER!? To make it worse she LIKED SOMEONE else! He was interrupted by the answer to his hopes and prayers.
The most amazing and beautiful girl Finn had ever seen. She had long black silky hair, and the most gorgeous teal eyes he had seen in his life. Of course he recognized her, or at least he thought.
Finn: "Umm, hi do I know you?"
The girl: "Are you kidding me Finn! It has only been (pausing to count the years on her fingers) 5 or 6 years! Remember I'm Marceline, your old best friend you idiot!"
**Marceline P.O.V**
Marceline couldn't believe how much her little Finny had grown! I guess he wasn't really her little Finny anymore. Even his outfit was completely different; he had lost the hat, and had his hair shining blonde hair down to his shoulders. And his outfit completely complimented his physique. He had on a form fitting red shirt (which really showed his nice abs ) a pair of long worn blue jeans, and classical black converse. Just looking at him made Marceline blush at how much he had grown!
**Finn .**
Part of him was in complete shock that she actually came back to Ooo, and the other part turned bright red about the dirty thoughts about Marceline that were going through his head. All he wanted to do was run to her and give her the most passionate kiss she had ever have (and some other unmentionable things) right where she standing. Restraining himself from doing anything rude to the girl he had crushed on when he was younger. He quietly managed to say.
**general P.O.V**
Finn: Marceline…Where the flip have you been? I searched for you for months, maybe even a year!" (His voice slowly rising)
Marceline: Well you see that's a long story…What about you? Why isn't Jake or PB with you?
Finn: Jake is at ladies, they had uni-puppies. And PB and I don't really talk anymore.
A light wind blew making Marceline shiver (don't think vamps feel the cold but to bad!), and also making Finn realize how cold it was. Taking this opportunity to see her house again he offered
Finn: Hey it's getting kind of cold, how about we head to your house. I'm kind of curious about how it looks after 5 ½ years…
Awkwardly taking a glance at Marceline's reaction to his question and her amazing figure, he blushed and quickly looked away when he realized that his mind has gone back into the gutter.
Marceline: Yeah, sure. So am I, it will be nice to see how the place looks.
Smiling a perfect white fanged smile Marceline started walking (or you could say floating) with Finn to her long forgotten home inside the cave she hadn't seen in so many years.
Along the way to Marceline's house things got really silent, an awful awkward silence, and Finn hated it. It let his mind go places he did NOT want to go, or did he, finally his thoughts all stopped at one question. 'Had Marceline dated anyone while she was gone?' if so could that person be the reason she left wherever she was!? If so was he going to be jealous of the person that Marceline left her friends for?
Without knowing it Finn blurted out "Marceline did you date anyone in the past 5 years!"
A look of shock quickly made its way to Marceline's face, did her little (not so little now) Finny just ask her about her love life? The shy and easily embarrassed Finn that she knew she thought would never ask something like that! Unless he was jealous! But that couldn't
Marceline pulled on a smirk to hide her shock, quietly flew next to his ear and asked a question she knew would get him embarrassed even if she hadn't seen him in the last 5 years "Why do you want to know Finny? Are you jealous?"
Finn's ears and entire face turned bright red and hot, like a hot steamy poker! Trying to cover up his actual thoughts he replied instantaneously "W...What! I have flipping no idea why the glob you think that Marcy! I was just wondering!"
Seeing how quickly Finn had replied to her question she knew she had just hit a big ol' bull's eye! Lost in her own thoughts as to why the thought of Finn being jealous of her and her ex made her the same bright red Finn was just a few seconds ago. She didn't realize that the hero was calling her name (really loudly) stating that they had arrived at her little old house in a cave.
Pulling her mind away from Finn and his jealousness, she turned to Finn with a huge smile on her face while she walked up the stairs to her front door and said "Whatcha waiting for my little Finny the hero of Ooo?"
"What! I was waiting for you! Which I seem to be doing a lot of lately!" Finn yelled at the Vampire Queen who he waited to come back from some unknown place for 5 years!
To say inside her house was the exact same was an understatement! Her house looked better then when she had left; there wasn't a speck of dust anywhere! Finn was flipping confused, he looked to Marceline to she is she was ½ as confused as he was. She was far from it! Finn had to know why she wasn't freaking out so he could stop being such a spaz
Finn: "Marceline why is your house so perfect? I remember it being a lot more messy then this when you left."
Marceline just shrugged and in nonchalant voice answered "Oh yeah Finn I forgot to tell you! I asked Simon (The Ice King) to keep my house clean while I was gone, I totally don't want to think how it would have looked after 5 ½ years without cleaning"
He couldn't believe his ears! Had she just said she LET the ICE KING in to her house to CLEAN!? So all this time when he thought that she had let without telling anyone! She had really had the time to go to IK (ice king) give him the keys to her house, tell HIM goodbye, and not even give him a single wave! Finally Finn's anger and frustration erupted
Finn: "WHAT THE GOLB! You told ICE KING you were leaving but not ME!? That is so NOT FLIPPING cool Marceline! You have no clue how much I FLIPPING CARE about you! How could you do that to ME, I thought you and I were FRIENDS!"
Marceline: "F...Finn I'm sorry it's just..." About to explain that if she told him about her leaving, he wouldn't have let her go. But before she could she cut off in midsentence by Finn grabbing both of her arms and pinning them above her head against one of the walls in Marceline's living room.
Finn had no clue what he was doing; he was just going along with his gut feel (as Jake always told him to do). But he was shocked when he realized that he had grabbed his crush's arms, pinned her to the wall to and started leaning in on her to do what looked like a kiss!
Marceline: F…Finn? FINN!? What are you doing, I thought you liked Bubblegu…
Once again being cut off but this time it was with a kiss.
Thanks for reading! If you like it please write a comment, and if you didn't like it please write a comment! Even though positive feedback would be extremely kind and make me feel good! So should I continue this story or just leave it hanging because my writing sucks?
