I'm back with an improved sequel. The last one, Edging the Balance. the begining fell apart and I pulled it off.. So I rewrote and I'm much happier now .

A few things to remember!

This the sequel to Edge of Blackness. My first wild and crazy fanfiction. Hey it was only 44 chapters long . This one won't be as long.

Palpatine is alive and well. He is now Anakin's father now. ( I thought Ian McDiarmid look too sweet to played a villian."

I love to misbehave in the Star Wars universe. So few hardcore rules and fact were wonderfully toss into a blackhole where they belong! I just love being bad.

Speaking of bad

I do have a learning disabilty and I do make grammer mistakes So don't point them out in the reviews. But I enjoy writing and I'm not going let that stop me. Lucky for this story. Aankin's Girl 4va is betaing this. Thank You

If you are looking for the chapter where Mace takes over the Order. that's chapter 5. You can skip the first 4 chapter if you want too. 1-4 chapter are about Anakin meeting his real father finally.

Enjoy!

Chapter 1

"You understand your instructions. ?"

"Yes I do"

"Good carry them out."

Yoda sat in his room, now and then, sighing. Every time he reached into the Force, it was the same thing.

Chaos

In a room in the back of JuJu's Droid Services and Repair shop,a lively game of Kopre was being played out.

"Anakin stop using the Force would you."JuJu accused him.

"I'm only using the Force to move the chips."Anakin counted back. "Ok here's five for the pile and I raise the pot by 10 credits."

"Thanks for the five Anakin." Zeno said, taking it and then threw in another 10 credits for the pot.

Anakin looked at his cards and threw another 10 credits and then drew another card."Oh yes!"

JuJu scowled at his hand and decided to chance it. "I'll throw 30 in the pot and I have a posi." as he laid down his hand.

Both Anakin and Zeno let a groan.

"You know, he claims that I use the Force. I ought to use it one these days. "Anakin said as he threw down his cards. " I had a great hand too."

Zeno laughed. "Oh well. We'll get him next time."

JuJu just smiled while counting his money. "250 credits. Yes! Another game?"

"No, I have to get back to the Temple. Artoo must be going crazy. I locked him in the apartment. "Anakin answered, getting up and putting on his cloak.

"What are your plans for tomorrow? "Zeno asked.

"I don't know yet. It depends on the Council's meeting. We're still, trying to settle some issue."

"Why don't you just leave? That Order is never going to change Anakin." JuJu suggested.

"Love to but I won't. Beside I think I have enough votes for the marriage proposal."Anakin said breaking into a huge grin. "Then the rest of the stuff should go through. Besides, it's fun making Master Windu grumpier than he is already is."

Zeno watched as Anakin left, then turn to JuJu. "You know he'll never leave the Order.

"Yes I know but I'm still praying for a "Yes" answer."

"Zhara, don't you even think about it."Obi-Wan said to his six-month-old daughter. Who was sitting on his lap while he was doing some computer research. After a couple weeks at the Temple, the Kenobi's were back home on Naboo.

Zharania Lexa Kenobi just giggled some more. Then took both of her hands and whacked the computer's console, causing a certain Daddy to lose his work.

"Zharania Kenobi, you are being very bad today. "Obi-Wan scolded as he put on the floor. " Go play please. Your badness must be coming from your Mother's genes today."

"I heard that Obi-Wan Kenobi. Zhara, Daddy must want to sleep in his office tonight."Karis said, while playfully smacking his head.

Obi-Wan pulled her down into his lap.

"Really, How about you sleep on the couch. ?"

"Only if you join me."

Zhara let another giggle as she watched her parents kiss.

"Master Jinn." Anakar Xensen called out.

"Yes Anakar and call me Qui-Gon please." he said, appearing before him.

Anakar smiled and took a deep breath.

"I'm ready to see my son. I think it's time I became Anakin's father as I should be. I have mourned Shmi's actual death and I'm sure Anakin is ready to see me too."

Qui-Gon smiled at his friend.

"Yes, it is time for you and your son to meet. Anakin was asking about you again. There's a limit to his patience. "

Anakin landed his speeder and started to walk across the landing field to the Temple. He stopped and turned around.

But saw nothing.

He continued on and then felt an odd presence nearby. He quickly grabbed his lightsaber and turned it on while searching the Force for an answer.

"Anakin what's wrong? Agen Kolar called out and started to run to him.

"I don't know something doesn't feel rig-"

The blaster's fire began to strafe the landing field, targeting Anakin, who started to deflected them back at his attackers.

Agen quickly turned his lightsaber on and began deflecting the bolts too. At the same time an alarm sounded and Jedi's began pouring out the Temple.

Soon there were no more bolts coming and Agen then turned to Anakin...

Who was now sprawled across the ground.

"Anakin!"