alright I'm rewriting this. I just read it and I hate it

STORY STARTS NOW

My name is Kosuya.

"WHERE IS THE HOKAGE?" A ninja asked the red haired Kazekage who was in a kneeled position in a deep thought at the edge of cliff that overlooked the damage that was being done. It was obvious a war was going on as many ninja were rushing in a direction towards a mass army of white. The battlefield that was once a forest was now ash. The sky that was once blue was now black, almost as if it was always like this.

I was born into a world in war.

The young Kazekage rose up, standing with confidence, opening his blackened eyes. "He will be here shortly."

A war against a great evil.

"KAZEKAGE-SAMA!" A ninja jumped up on a rock about thirty-feet behind the young Kazekage, who looked back at him in acknowledgement.

"Yes what is it?" The man asked in with a sterness in his voice.

"They finally caught Bee-san." The young ninja stated. This message caused the Kazekage's eyes to widen.

Gaara turned to battlefield, mouth gaping, breaking into a coldsweat 'That means they have all nine now.'

A high pitch roar pierced through the land. The ground started to shake, mountains to began to fall and the moon had rinnegan with tomoes in the rings appear as it started to fall closer to the earth.

I am a jinchuriki

"I AM FRREEEEE" The moon land on earth with omniforce, killing thousands of ninja in it's destructive path.

The Kazekage stood in horror as the Jubi no biju started to emerge from the moon, releasing a monsterous roar.

"THE HOKAGE IS HERE!" A random ninja shouted as dashing towards the Jubi with the others. a Giant cloud of smoke appeared.

As the smoke cleared a figure in the Hokage robe appeared on top of the Kyuubi that was flickering with golden flames and black lines where his chakra flowed and also where six seals where around his neck. The Hokage was craddling a small new born child. "HEY YOU BIG DUMB MONSTER THIS ENDS HERE." The figure yelled at Juubi, which caused the monster to turn around.

The Hokage took off his cover, revealing his golden locks and smiled at the child. "You're the only one able to contain this monster, Kosuya. Hopefully you can stop this from ever happening." Naruto looked up at the Jubi, doing a single seal. "Fūinjutsu: Shiki Fūjin" The demon was being sucked inside the newborns belly button. Naruto looked down at the little girl who had some reddish hair, her blue eye's flashing with the rinnegan and tomoes, reverting back to blue, whisker marks on her cheeks. "I love you Kosuya." a single tear ran down his face.

Naruto fell over off the golden flamed Kyuubi's head Just to be caught by it's hand. The Kyuubi lowered them down to the ground where another redheaded woman in a white robe with red flames on the the base, resided gasping at the seen. "NAARUUUTOO." she cried as she ran over holding on to him.

Naruto opened his eye's weakly. "heh, don't cry Tayuya-hime." he chuckled.

Tayuya looked at him with soft, hurting, brown eyes. "You idiot how could you do this to me?"

Naruto looked at her with a weak grin. "So you two could live." The hero known as the Rokudaime Hokage closed his eye's leaving the world forever.

A pillar of sand jumped out of the ground revealing gaara. A pillar of lava shot up revealing Mei and the Raikage and Tsukikage came from the sky. All of them muttered out one name 'Naruto' Surrounding the blonde with his crying wife and sleeping child not daring to say a word. A Melodic Sreech interupted the sad moment though. (Think of Lugia from pokemon) Seeing the golden flamed kyuubi holding off a small black figure only known as Madara and his zombified jinchuriki's who were releasing the rinnegan summons against the grand Kyuubi.

The kage's looked at each other and nodded as they knew what had to be done. Gaara approched Tayuya kneeling down to her crying over Naruto's body holding the child closely. "Tayuya-chan let me take Kosuya-chan with me."

The red haired girl shot a look at him with her tear stained face. "No she's the only thing I have left in this world." looking back down at her naked child holding her tighter to her chest.

Gaara lifted her fallen chin."I'll take her back to before this all began and keep her safe, none of us Kage's can defeat Madara. Not with the rinnegan in his possession." Gaara looked down at the child in her arms. "But she has the power, the power to save everyone so no one has to die."

Tayuya grabbed his collar with her right hand bringing him up close to her face. "THEN TAKE ME WITH YOU."

Gaara looked at her with sterness in his eye's "I can't you'll die. Only those with the tainted chakra of the biju can survive the process." Tayuya let the collar of his shirt go, noding in understand ment.

Tayuya pulled out a picture of her with Naruto behind her with his hands on her shoulder, handing it to the child who grabbed it and smiled holding it close to her. "That's me your mommy and your knucklehead father, Just remember we always will love you no matter what time your in."

Gaara spoke up. "Tayuya-chan we must start the jutsu now." She nodded and kissed her daughter's forhead. "I love you Kosuya-hime."

Handing over the child to the kazekage. "Please Gaara take care of her, let her know who her parents were, make her proud to be a Uzumaki." Gaara nodded holding the child.

The remaining three kage's gathered around Gaara and the child. They started the hand signs for the jutsu. After completing the three kage's collapsed dead from chakra exhaustion letting a black hole looking portal appeared. "Goodbye Tayuya-chan, I'll see you soon." Gaara stepped through the portal to only vanish.

8 YEARS IN THE PAST

Gaara opened his eye's, waking to the crying of a child. Groaning as every bone in his body screamed at him while standing up with the child. His skin cracked everywhere, falling as sand. He quickly rebuilt his sand armor with a single hand sign. He looked over to see his gourd broken and his sand everywhere. He quickly rebuilt it the same way he did his armor.

Now looking down at the child he realized that he had to go to Suna. It would be better to rebuild the past starting with himself and raising this child and hopefully himself. He ripped off his sash and wrapped the crying child in it. "Don't worry Kosuya-chan, we'll get your mother back soon."

Gaara didn't know how to take care of children and didn't dare trust anyone but the parents of his best friends child to even hold her. So he was left with one decision. "I'm going to get Tayuya-chan."

END OF CHAPTER

ALRIGHT SO I THINK THIS IS A LOT BETTER THEN THE O.G. LEGEND OF THE KING OF DEMONS.

YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO R & R IF I GET ENOUGH POSITIVE REVIEWS I'LL CONTINUE