Please Review. I hope you enjoy another Anakin, Obi-Wan
and Qui-Gon story. Hopefully this will be good, like my other
one.
Thoughts are suppossed to be in bold. I have no idea if it will
work though!
Chapter 1-
Talk about home, Anakin thought as he stared at the endless
miles of dirt and rocky terrain in front of him. His masters
were behind him, discussing the mission they were on. He was
suppossed to be listening, but his thoughts kept getting the
better of him.
When the chatter behind him finished, Anakin drove his attention
back to where he was. Anakin swallowed nervously when he saw Qui-
Gon's amused expression and Obi-Wan's...less happy one.
"Anakin, you're on this mission, too. I would strongly advise
you to listen," Obi-Wan said sternly.
"Yes master," Anakin said apologetically.
"Good. Now listen this time. I'll sum it up for you. The place
where we are trying to find is in the dirt."
"In the dirt."
"Yes."
"As in under the ground."
"Yes."
"So we are going to be walking like a chicken with our head cut
off, looking for a place in the scorching heat."
"If you want to put it that way...yes."
"So..you're say-"
Obi-Wan cut him off in annoyance. "Anakin take a breath and
listen. You ask too many questions!"
Anakin immediatly shut his mouth and grinned. Obi-Wan smiled and
cleared his throat. They both looked to Qui-Gon who was staring
off in the distance.
"And you tell me to pay attention," Anakin muttered playfully.
They both chuckled a bit before Qui-Gon turned and smiled.
"You two through bickering?"
"Yes," the two younger ones said in unison.
"Good, come on we'd better start. It seems to be cooling off a
bit."
Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan started off but Anakin said, " Don't you
think you're forgetting something?"
The two other jedi looked at their apprentice but it was Qui-Gon
who answered," No...why Ani?"
Anakin sighed and said," Have you forgotten that we're going
through a desert and that it is very, very hot until the sun
goes down all the way?"
"No."
"Well we'll die of heat stoke if we go out there without
protection. I grew up in a desert so...here."
Anakin tore three strips of cloth off a spare cloak in his pack.
He poured water from his canteen on them and handed Qui-Gon and
Obi-Wan one and kept one for himself.
"Tie those around your head. To keep you from passing out."
They did as he said and when they were on Obi-Wan smiled and
said," Very good Anakin. At least your brain isn't where your
thoughts are."
Anakin frowned. "Wait a minute..you-"
Qui-Gon smiled. "Yes we know. We just wanted to see if you were
thinking, let's go."
As he followed his masters Anakin let out a breath. He could
hear them conversing quietly and laughing. Anakin smiled as he
listened to them. After all that was a pretty good one. He
almost fell for it.
Well at least I've learned something today, Anakin thought,
Never underestimate your masters.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There's the first chapter.....more to come. If you have any
thing you'd like to see, I am WELCOME TO SUGGESTION!!!
and Qui-Gon story. Hopefully this will be good, like my other
one.
Thoughts are suppossed to be in bold. I have no idea if it will
work though!
Chapter 1-
Talk about home, Anakin thought as he stared at the endless
miles of dirt and rocky terrain in front of him. His masters
were behind him, discussing the mission they were on. He was
suppossed to be listening, but his thoughts kept getting the
better of him.
When the chatter behind him finished, Anakin drove his attention
back to where he was. Anakin swallowed nervously when he saw Qui-
Gon's amused expression and Obi-Wan's...less happy one.
"Anakin, you're on this mission, too. I would strongly advise
you to listen," Obi-Wan said sternly.
"Yes master," Anakin said apologetically.
"Good. Now listen this time. I'll sum it up for you. The place
where we are trying to find is in the dirt."
"In the dirt."
"Yes."
"As in under the ground."
"Yes."
"So we are going to be walking like a chicken with our head cut
off, looking for a place in the scorching heat."
"If you want to put it that way...yes."
"So..you're say-"
Obi-Wan cut him off in annoyance. "Anakin take a breath and
listen. You ask too many questions!"
Anakin immediatly shut his mouth and grinned. Obi-Wan smiled and
cleared his throat. They both looked to Qui-Gon who was staring
off in the distance.
"And you tell me to pay attention," Anakin muttered playfully.
They both chuckled a bit before Qui-Gon turned and smiled.
"You two through bickering?"
"Yes," the two younger ones said in unison.
"Good, come on we'd better start. It seems to be cooling off a
bit."
Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan started off but Anakin said, " Don't you
think you're forgetting something?"
The two other jedi looked at their apprentice but it was Qui-Gon
who answered," No...why Ani?"
Anakin sighed and said," Have you forgotten that we're going
through a desert and that it is very, very hot until the sun
goes down all the way?"
"No."
"Well we'll die of heat stoke if we go out there without
protection. I grew up in a desert so...here."
Anakin tore three strips of cloth off a spare cloak in his pack.
He poured water from his canteen on them and handed Qui-Gon and
Obi-Wan one and kept one for himself.
"Tie those around your head. To keep you from passing out."
They did as he said and when they were on Obi-Wan smiled and
said," Very good Anakin. At least your brain isn't where your
thoughts are."
Anakin frowned. "Wait a minute..you-"
Qui-Gon smiled. "Yes we know. We just wanted to see if you were
thinking, let's go."
As he followed his masters Anakin let out a breath. He could
hear them conversing quietly and laughing. Anakin smiled as he
listened to them. After all that was a pretty good one. He
almost fell for it.
Well at least I've learned something today, Anakin thought,
Never underestimate your masters.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There's the first chapter.....more to come. If you have any
thing you'd like to see, I am WELCOME TO SUGGESTION!!!