Ode to Aeris
This
This crazy life
This crazy world of ours
I
I can't recall
The last time anything made sense at all
-
Why us
Why me
All I see
Is the day they took you away from me
Just standing there
Watching you
Knowing there's nothing I can do
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My mind is blank
My throat is dry
My legs feel weak
But I can't cry
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And you go
And now you're gone
And I know
I should move on
But it's true
I'm still not over you
A/N: It sounds much better with music, I swear.
Yeah, my stories are humor, but almost all of my songs are angsty—you'd be surprised. This one's fairly mild in comparison.
You know, I don't even like Aeris very much.
08/10/05: That... was weird. If you don't know what I'm talking about, read my first review. I'm leaving it up for the sheer weirdness factor.
...Have you read it? If you didn't read the whole thing, you didn't miss much, trust me. However, two sentences in particular caught my eye: "Your attempt at constructing a creative flame was pitiful. I mean, really, stringing together a bunch of insults among a load of babbling was hardly effective." I checked my entire review history and found not one negetive review. Not one. And I never, ever, ever leave anonymous reviews.
Is it a joke or something? Like, a bizarre attempt at irony? A flame flaming someone for flaming when she has never flamed anyone in her entire? Someone insulting the grammar and writing style and nonexistant "tiny-fisted tantrums" in a freakin' poem? Insulting aforementioned poem with insults that perfectly describe the flame itself? 'Cause I don't get it. I really don't. I suppose it might have been funny if I knew it was a joke, so long as it's just at me, instead of someone else, because then I'd really be pissed off.
I'm not angry or upset or anything. It doesn't bother me in the least, mostly because I'm impossible to successfully insult, and partially because I'm too busy being confused. Whoever wrote that, I'm not mad in the least, and I would greatly appreciate it if you would email me. I promise I won't announce it, and as I view promises as sacred and use them sparingly, anyone can rest assured that I always keep my promises. So be a dear and email me, would you?