Where did I go wrong:Chapter 1:
Swiper the Fox
Kiwiri: This may have some minor spoilers in it so be aware!
Sly and Carmelita got married and…. By the way I don't Watch Dora, my little sister does so I go along for the ride.
"Mommy daddy! I want a lolli!" the child cried. That child was Sly and Carmelita's son. The most annoying thing in the world…..(Those of you that know Dora the Explorer) Swiper the Fox!
"Swiper! Not now!" Carmelita replied. Sly stared at her. It made sense, Carmelita was a fox….Sly was a theif. Thus they got Swiper. Carmelita wasn't at all comfortable with this. For one…this guy was a brat. Even they couldn't stand him.
"Uh Carmelita…I'll go mow the lawn" Sly offered.
"Oh no please let me!" Carmelita almost pleaded. No matter what happened, she was not staying home with him alone. Not today anyways. The two kept fighting until they heard Swiper's 21st whine for a lollipop. Carmelita handed Sly one and rushed outside.
For once, Sly had been tricked. Was he losing it? He stared at his only son and threw the lollipop in his mouth. He ate it like there was no tommorow.
"Shank rou" he was drooling. Sly took out a napkin and whiped up his face. "Daddy …did you know that I like to steal…and talk…and steal…and eat lollies… and talk….and steal….and eat…and talk…" He just went on and on……what was worse was that Sly was completely alone.
Once he heard the door open he rushed and pulled Carmelita in. "Swiper," Carmelita said ,"we need to talk"
"Yes mum?" he said sucking on his green lollipop. They had a life supply of those things just to make him queit for a while. "Tommorow Daddy and mommy won't be home okay?"
"Why?"
"We have….work!" Sly replied.
"Yes… you will be babysitted." Carmelita told him.
Let's see how well that goes! Who likes it? If you don't, stop reading it! Lol that was random!