Hey again guys, this is just something that i needed your help with if you are interested.

It is set during Somalia, I do sometimes love Somalia fanfictions and other times i dont, but that is me being weird.

I would like to know if i should continue or abandon ship. Thanks!

Answering

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten.

Waiting...

Then she started counting again the numbers and words lost their meaning after a while but by then it was just a habit.

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten.

She had been waiting now for months and without relief. Her skin was battered and bruised and her soul was just as torn up. She felt that she had been let down by her friends, her real family.

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven , eight, nine , ten.

She didn't want to think about what they had done to her, her mind couldn't possibly comprehend the pain that they had inflicted on her small fragile body

One , two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten.

She tried to focus on other things, the words that were spit out of the men's mouth in front of her. She tried to think about when they would next be in to...see her.

Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two , one.

he hit his head against the wall behind his bed for each number. He felt that long hard pain in his chest.

Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, for, three, two, one.

The pain was over; he let his hand fall from his chest and back beside him.

He picked up his mobile and let his shaky hands punch the numbers into the phone, while it as ringing he lay down slowly and once again the answering machine picked up.

'Hello, you have reach Ziva David I am unable to answer the phone now but please leave a message i will hope to get back to you'

He left his sobs on her machine and hung up. His shaky hands dialled again

Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one

'Hello, you have reached Ziva David...

He let her voice soothe him to his restless sleep.

So what do you think, should i continue, I love your opinions

Thanks