This is my first fan fiction, and I want to know you opinion. Please read!

Oh, by the way, I already changed and delete some things. After I read it again, I found how bad this story was. I hope this is better!

Disclaimer : I don't own Harvest Moon, and won't own it!

Chapter 1

JPOV

"So this is Forget-Me-Not-Valley…" I muttered to myself, while staring at the gate of Forget-Me-Not-Valley. That's a random name for a valley, but what's my right to complain?

Suddenly, I felt a presence behind me. How come I don't felt the presence before? I turned around.

Someone was coming here. After I could see the stranger more than just a shadow, I gasped. He/she had a white… or rather silver hair. His/her eyes were like emerald, so green. He/she surprisingly looked nice, but that's not the problem! I didn't know if it a she or he! How could I greet him/her? What should I do to make myself looked great, or at least fine?

I tried to greet him/ her. "Hi…", "Hehe. Hello, beautiful. Walking alone at night?" he/she smirking, effectively cut me.

How rude!

But I think he/she didn't mean to be rude, just didn't hear me…

Why are you making excuse for him/her?

I don't know! Why don't you leave me alone?

The annoying 'conscience' shut up at the least, but now I notice he/ she was staring at me. His smirk still put on at his/ her face, by the way.

"Who are you?" I asked him/her, started suspicious. Was he/she just called me beautiful? What kind of game he/she playing right now? My mind already fulfilled by too many question that, I knew very well won't get an answer soon.

He/she still smirking, there was no way he/she knew that would make me annoyed right? "Hehe. I'm quite the ladies' man, and a prince of the stars." Did he/she must start every sentence with 'hehe'? But he/ she hadn't finished. "Hehe. Call me Phantom Skye."

Again, but I didn't pay any attention to that 'hehe' anymore. What had he/she said? Phantom Skye? That's a ridiculous name, but that explain that I should call him by he. I tried. "Phantom… Skye…." Well, I'll give him a nick name later.

"So, Phantom Skye, what are you doing at this midnight?" I asked him, want to know more about him, but I said the 'Phantom' with a pressure, like talking about something bad, dirty.

He frowned. "I will thank you if you said my name with a normal way, beautiful." I snickered, "So don't thank me for it, I just don't like your name, Pants." He gave a smile, but it faded when he realized something. "And what are you mean by Pants?" I rolled my eyes. "Isn't it obvious? It's your temporary nick name."

His voice got louder. "My nick name? Why would I need a nick name? Can't you just call me Phantom Skye like any other girls? And why exactly it's Pants?"

I staring at him, but he didn't notice the change in my mood. "And what exactly do you mean by any other girls, Panty?"

Cliffhanger! I really had made my own stories, even the fact this story had a different summary than my intended first.

Please review so I could know will I continue this story or not. I will really appreciate the review, especially the bad because I can make a better story from that review.

Thanks.