Title: The Second Kiss

Author: Rose 85 (Rommie)

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: I do not own Peter Parker/Spiderman or Mary Jane Watson they belong to Marvel and Stan Lee.

Summery: A small fic based on thoughts crossing MJ's mind during the kiss scene at the end of the movie.

Feed back: reviews are always welcome, either use the review button at the bottom of the page or E-mail me at rommie85@yahoo.co.uk.

~The Second Kiss~

~By Rommie~

Lips pressing against his, trailing soft skin, a thought broke through tangled webs of emotion, hanging submerged in the base of her sub conscience mind. Sweet breath flooded over her pale flesh igniting thousands of unlit candles. Warmth crawled through her, touching nerves, caressing her spine. You now that feeling you get when you kiss someone new for the fist time. That powerful sensation that knocks you off your feet, feeling their aura wrap around you, warming muscles, touching your beating heart. Then when you kiss them for the second time part of their aura is still swimming through your vains, so you're own aura mixes with theirs. It makes you want more. You want to touch it. Feel it over your exposed skin. It's so powerful that it's frightening. That burning desire that thrives, pushes us forward but can also hold us back. That what I'm feeling right now. Something so deep, not even my beating heart can withstand its power. Cool fingers touch my face, hovering over delicate skin. When he suddenly pulls away from me, the venerability that takes over, it's indescribable. I feel so exposed. I can feel my aura merging with his, tasting it for the second time. Sub conscience minds open up to astonishing possibilities. Something that couldn't be possible, yet everything was pointing to it. In a way I want it to be real, want it to be true. That way I can forgive him for pulling away from me. A reason more powerful that words. But what if I'm wrong. Tears streamed flesh, touching her lips; numb fingers glided the hot surface. What if the retreating figure never looks back? What if this really was the first kiss? Emptiness claims the landscape. Fear silences the beating heart. But if this was the second kiss, then maybe the possibilities are beyond me. That the retreating figure, isn't really moving further away. Just making room for a larger life, something frightening, but significant. That's its worth waiting for. I just hope Peter Parker can open up, and that Spiderman will find the courage to let him.

…The End…

Something I just kinda came up with after watching the movie. I've had this on my computer for ages. Finally got round to posting it. I don't normally do movies, I can be found hiding in the dark Angel section with two disasters in the works. Please forgive spellings and grammar. All my reviews tend to consist of people commenting on my bad spellings. I have my Dark Angel stories beta read by a fellow DA fan, she deserved a brake. I'm not very up to date when it comes to Spiderman so this is a one-story thing. If I were to write larger in depth story I would have to go and start watching the series and reading the comics. Not that I wouldn't mind. Even I can't say that I've never read a Spiderman comic, hell I used to watch everyone of the cartoons, the newer version that is…

Please review and name your favourite Spidey villain. Don't ask me why, its the 'heat of the moment' thing... I'm trying to work out who might be the next bad in Spider 2. I'm guessing Dc Conner or Octopus (sp).

~Rommie~