This is my first fanfic so please give me everything to criticize. I mainly write poetry but I thought I would give this a shot. Please review and tell me what it needs. I have it all written out already but I can change stuff.
Disclaimer: I do not own Kingdom Hearts characters
Chapter 1
Demyx POV
I was sitting in my room playing my Sitar, not really any song though. I was way too bored and upset. I want someone to hang out with and talk to. Someone to be around other than at the occasional 'important meetings' with Xemnas. The stupid retard I thought. Then I heard the retards voice boom through my room and the rest of the castle.
"Everyone report to the meeting room!" I glared at nothing. "That means now, idiots!"
I slowly stood up from my comfy bed, wishing I could lay back down. 'I could cuddle with my Sitar!' he thought. 'We could make sweet love.' I laughed at myself. I really needed to find some people to hang out with. I was starting to think my lame humor was actually funny.
I slowly made my way to the door and headed toward the meeting room. I had my eyes on the floor so I wasn't watching where I was going. I suddenly ran into a big spiky, mess of red fluff.
"Hey, watch where you're walking, you tard!" Axel wheeled around.
I could feel that he was glaring daggers at me but I kept my eyes on the floor. "Sorry," I said, while raising my eyes to him. "I didn't mean to bother you." And then I saw Axel's eyes soften a little.
Axel POVI looked at the kid and thought 'Man, he needs to take some anti-depressants.' He would usually just yell back at me. I ruffled his hair. "Hey, I was only joking around with you bud." I saw a small smile appear on his face. "And you know I would love to stand here in the hallway and gossip with you, but we need to get to the meeting." I rolled my eyes. "It's important," I said while doing the quote-un-quote gesture. And so I lead the way down the meeting room.
Demyx POVI was still in shock from the Axel being nice thing. The redhead had even let me sit next to him during the meeting. I sat quietly, thinking about stupid shit, waiting for Xemnas to arrive. 'Why did we have to hurry if he wants even going to be here yet. I pictured myself poking Xemnas in the eyes and kicking him in the shin. I smiled to myself and then let out a small, evil, HeHe.
A portal appeared and out walked Xemnas. "Everyone shut-up an listen closely." Xemnas looked at us as if we were dirt and then a small smirk spread across his lips. "I'm going to get right down to business. I don't want any interruptions. You can ask questions after I'm finished." He smiled slightly.
I just stared at him. Why was everyone being nicer than usual lately? Everyone usually walked around like they had something up their ass and were PMS'ing. I laughed to myself but quickly stopped when I noticed Xemnas was staring at me.
"Anyway," continued Xemnas, "There seems to be some trouble on this world called earth. Heartless have been spotted in a town called Dex Springs. They have stolen everyone's hearts. But it seems two girls," he stopped and closed his eyes, letting out a big gust of air and drew it back in slowly. "There are two girls that seem to have been turned into Nobodies." Xemnas stopped and rubbed his temples.
I perked up at the thought. Two girls eh? I let a big grin spread across my face. "So does that mean they are going to come here," I yelled. I had squeaked every word out. All the guys in the room started laughing. I looked to Larxene to see her roll her eyes and flip her hair.
"No they are not coming here," scoffed a guy with dread locks and strange sideburns. "Even if they did, not like either of them would be interested in you. You're a tard!" The main laughed and pointed at me.
I hunkered down in my chair. I was tired of being called a tard. I was brought back out of my thoughts by Xemnas.
"Actually they will be coming here, Xaldin. And Demyx will be one of the members going to get them. Along with Axel." Xemnas looked to me.
I stared up at the man. I let a small yippee escape my mouth and I pumped a fist into the air. "Do I really get to!" I squealed. I looked next to me to see Axel slam his head onto the table, mumbling something about why me. I didn't even care, I was way too excited to care. I ruffled the redhead's hair but quickly tried to pull away when I heard a growl from his throat. Axel grabbed my wrist and I let out a girly scream.
"You jackass," I whimpered, "you burned the few hairs I had!" I watched as Axel rolled his eyes and I continued to pet my arm softly. I looked up from my arm to see a portal at the front of the room next to Xemnas.
"We expect you back tonight," spoke Xemnas, irritation in his voice. "Please don't screw anything up. They know you are coming to get them. So you don't have to worry about anything." He paused. "But they might have to. They might be smothered by Demyx or turned in to ashes by Axel." He laughed quietly. "Alright you two."
I jumped up quickly bumping into Axel. I yelped and ran up toward Xemnas and hid behind him.
Xemnas kicked his leg back and hit me right where it hurt. "Please quit being such a tard Demyx!" He said watching Demyx stumble over to the portal. "Axel get up here and get on your way please. I want to enjoy being in the castle without Demyx."
I was over waiting by the portal watching as Axel slowly made his way up to Xemnas. His shoulders were slouched and his fists were clenched. He stopped in front of Xemnas and they started mumbling a few words. Finally I heard Xemnas yell "Quit being such a fuckin' puss and get over it!" He shoved Axel and he disappeared through the portal, followed by Demyx.
Someone's POV"So," I said in giggly voice, " do you think these guys that are coming to get us are hot?"
A chocolate brown eyed girl stared at me. Her red/brown hair falling in front of her eye as she turned her head to look at me.
I watched as the other girl rolled over to me, stopping right by my feet. Then the girl rolled right over my feet, heading toward the kitchen.
She stopped and turned around. Jumping when she saw hazel eyes with yellow around the pupil staring back at her, curls falling down in her face.
"Holy hell, Christy!" The girl laughed. "Don't do that!" She pushed her wheels forward, intending on running her over again. But she was stopped by Christy's foot, pushing her back through the kitchen doorway.
"Come on Kat," I pouted, while giving her the puppy dog eyes. "Aren't you just a tad curious!"
"Well maybe a little. But I need to go to the bathroom."
I pushed Kat into the bathroom still giggling about what they looked like and how I was going to squiss their cheeks.
"Well," I said on my way out of the bathroom, pushing Kat. "I bet they are…" I heard Kat grunt then say my name. "No Kat, let me finish." We started walking into the living room. "I bet they are gorgeous and I want to molest them!" I finished of with that I was saying. "Now what the flip do you want?"
I looked down in front of Kat's wheelchair and noticed a pair of black shoes. They were not hers, they can't be. They were pointing the wrong way.
I looked up to see a guy with blonde hair spiked up on top and longer chunks hanging in front of his eyes. I wanted to touch him. He was wearing a black cloak. I looked into his sea-green eyes. I was in love.
"Well," said the cloaked guy, "am I gorgeous enough for you to molest me?"
I smiled a little at him and then he extended his hand. "The name is Demyx." I took his hand and shook it. It was extremely soft. I didn't want to let go, but Kat spoke up.
"Uh…ok then." She looked up at me. "Christy let go of the guys hand." She pulled my hand out of Demyx's hand. "I thought there was supposed to be two of you?" She looked up to Demyx who smiled warmly at her. "Oh ya this is Christy, pardon her," She pushed me a little trying to make me stop staring. "She is a tard."
"Kat don't call me a tard." I felt my cheeks turn pink and I looked away.
"Hey," Demyx cooed. "Don't worry about it. Axel calls me a tard all the time!" He smiled at me and then walked into the living room and around the corner. "Axel, get out of the chair and come see our new friends!"
I heard Demyx whisper something about "they are pretty hot" and then he returned. A guy with the same cloak followed him. He had red spiky hair and upside-down teardrops tattooed under his eyes. I just stared at him. I leaned down to Kat. "You can have him," I said quietly.
"The name is Axel," he spoke somewhat coldly. "Got it memorized?" He held out his hand to us and Kat took it quickly.
"My name is Kat," she said softly. "Or you can call me Shorty."
I looked down to see her cheeks turn a bright red. I watched her drop his hand and he extended it toward me. I didn't take it, instead I ran up to him and squissed his cheeks. "Oh, how cute!" I screamed. Then I felt him grab my wrists and they started to burn. "Ow!" I whimpered and stepped back away from him. "What was that?"
"Nobody chubs my cheeks or they will get torched," he hissed. He let a smirk spread across his face.
I sat down in a chair and Demyx came to my side. He kneeled down beside me. A blue and white guitar looking thing appeared in his arms. He spoke the words "Dane water dance!" and cold water was sprayed onto my wrists. It fell to the floor and I looked up into Demyx's eyes. 'He is just so cute' I thought. "What was that thing?" I asked.
"That is my Sitar," Demyx said. "I control water with it. I can also play music with it. It is sort of like a guitar but a Sitar only has 3 strings and a guitar has 6 strings." He pointed over to Axel. "He controls fire and he has a weapon too. He can summon chakrams." He stood back up and walked over to stand next to Axel.
"I know this is fun and all," Axel said slyly, "but Xemnas is expecting us back at the castle soon.
I watched as his eyes darted around the room. "Well Kat and I have to grab our bags," I said while turning Kat around heading into her bedroom.
We went back toward the living room and we were grabbed and pulled into a black weird thing.
Well I hope you liked it so far. And I will try and get the next chapter typed and posted for you to review. I have it all written out.
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