This my first ever story and i would like to guy like review and help me make it better thxs. oh! almost forgot the disclaimer
for the disclaimer i brought my new friend it from here russia
Russia : Mercy825 does not own Hetalia or the characters used in this story so da
America POV
Large flakes fell from the heavens painting the pathway; crispy white, shinning covering that transforms the landscape making it a land full of the wonder and undiscovered mysteries; like a starved wolf, the wind ravished at my fingers. Harsh air whistles around my ears, causing my skin to tingle and sting. I hear the brittle snow crunching beneath my feet. The sunlight allows the snow-capped trees to shimmer in all their beauty.
The world seemed to fall silent as the snowflakes float down from the heavens, twirling and swirling with such beauty I couldn't help but feel captivated by the scene. I smile in the placid silence mesmerized by its sheer beauty and glory.
I capture a glimpse of sun nearing its journey, the was no time to waste so I quickened my pace, my warm breath trailing besides me. I finally caught sight of my destination. It was gigantic; decorated from top to bottom in ornaments and lights. It was truly a sight to behold. Finally I reached the entrance to heavy ornamented doors; quickly I grabbed the door hanger and tapped it repeatedly.
The door opened; instead of a tall nation there stood a girl with framed platinum blonde locks placed in a bow. She was dressed in a knee length dress navy blue dress. She looked about 5 ft 3. "заявить свой бизнес" she spoke in a stoic manner." "Yo is Russia here" заявить свой бизнес she repeated almost in the same stoic manner. " sorry babe I kind of rusty with my Russian"
next thing i know i'm down on the cold icy floor with a knife plastered to neck