Hey I'm new here but I hope you all like my story
A big thank you to my fantastic inspiration CorsomeeCorey you are great dude
It's a beautiful day outside as I lied on the ground and looked in the sky. I was nervous because I can smell smoke. There was a voice, and suddenly, it called my name.
"Mr. Garcia... Mr. Garcia... Mr. Garcia."
I opened my eyes and looked in two his wonderful eyes. I saw on his clothes that he is paramedic and his name was Logan Mitchell. He asks me if I'm ok but I don't answer him. Then I heard the noise around me and I realized that I am on the ground of a highway, laid out.
Then, something shoots through my mind and in my head. I looked to my right side and saw a completely destroyed aar and realized that it was the aar from James. I looked around myself, searching for him but I don't find James laying on the Ground.
"J-J-J-James?" I groaned.
The Paramedic smiled unhappy and I saw a tear in his eyes.
"James? Where is James?" I ask.
"I´m so sorry …..So sorry." He said.
"Where is he? Where is James?" I screamed, pain in my voice.
"He is … he is…." He stuttered.
"He is what?" I ask.
"Mr. Garcia, it's time to be strong.. I am really sorry but he's gone. We had no chance to rescue him after the collision…. He is dead.."
"No … No…. Why? Why?" I cried.
"The collision was very strong and he smashed out of the window … he was immediately dead." He explain.
I looked at his car, seeing all the Paramedics work on the car and then I saw James. His face was covered with blood and on his clothes was a big bloodstain.
I cried and Logan put his arm around me, took me up from the ground and brought me to the ambulance.
CONTINUE FAST!
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