So I should really be working on other things such as school and other fics, but I decided I wasn't completely satisphied with the way alot of Twilight fics were done so this is my perspective.
Any ideas or constructive critisism would be appreciated. Please give me feedback so I know people give a shit.
Slash. Possible mpreg. Actually thats very likely, because of my werewolf theories. First Twilight fanfic.
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"You know, Jake, it's not the end of the world. Think positive, yes?"
"No."
"C'mon! Stranger things have happened!"
"No they haven't."
"Yeh! Like Quil and Clair…"
"Hey yeh!"
"But boys?"
"Well, you can't help who you imprint on… it's not a choice."
"Yeh Jake! It's destiny!"
"Shut up Seth."
Kay, so I was being a little bit rude. They really were trying to help. But honestly, if they were in my position, they'd be chucking a mental. Actually, considering the situation, I think I'm pretty sweet. Actually.
"Well at least tell us how it happened, Jake!"
I don't think Seth has a filter to stop him from saying the wrong thing, cause really this was not what I wanted to talk about. So I'd stay quiet. Leah, Seth, Embry and Quil sat around me, staring at me. Comforting me. Oh god, they really did want me to tell them.
"Alright…"
"Yes!"
"Shut it, Seth!"
"Yeh… so anyway. Uh, Bella wanted me to drop something off… or something. Oh right, she wanted to know more about the war between the bloodsuckers and us."
"That bitch."
"Shh Embry!"
"…Thanks Seth. So anyway… there was this book. And, you know I can't say 'no' to Bells! So, I got it from Sam's house…"
"Jake!"
"So, I got it from Sam's house and I took the Rabbit out to Forks to give it to her and of course I smelt the bloodsucker so I knocked and waited and he answered and I walked past him and he asked what I wanted so I turned to look at him..."
"Breathe Jake!"
I hung my head. Shit. "And, I noticed that his eyes were like black. Like… black black. Really black. So I looked into them…"
"Oh geez…"
"And then I felt so good so I kept looking and I felt better…"
"And you imprinted."
"And I imprinted."
Finally after seemed like a good amount of bracing time I looked up. Leah looked disgusted. Embry looked like he was going to laugh. Quil looked confused. Seth looked delighted.
"Aww Jakey! What's it like?"
"Well it's…"
"Don't!" Leah closed her eyes tight and breathed in really deep. In a pained voice she said, "We really, really, don't want to know."
"You should tell Sam."
"Quil!"
"What? He can be really understanding! Why, when I imprinted of Clair..."
"What's wrong with that scenario?"
"She was two!"
"Ok yes she was two, but she wasn't a vampire… man. Dude, sorry, but Jakes got you beat!"
Seth was still beaming. I kind of want to be sick. "So Jakey… what happened then. Did you confess?" Oh Lord!
"No! God no!"
The other three looked relived. "No, no. No. Geez Seth! ...I legged it, kay?
More stunned silence. I tend to do that to people these days.
Leah barked a laugh. "You legged it?"
"Well, I mean, yeh…! What else was I going to do?"
"Fucked if I know… but geez Jake, anything would have been better than that!"
Embry and Quil jumped to agree.
"Well yeh you couldn't have tried to be nice?"
"Did you at least say hi to Bella or something?"
"That's not polite Jake."
"Guys! Jake's going through a tough time right now, kay? Be respectful!" God damn it Seth. "What happened?"
"Ok, so he read what I was thinking…"
"What?"
"Bella said some of the bloodsuckers have special abilities and his is to read minds."
"Fuck no privacy in that family."
"Yeh… so anyway. He read what I was thinking and laughed so… I chucked the book at his face and legged it."
"Hmm…. Yes, you probably should have handled that better Jake."
Thanks for nothing Seth.
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