Okay this is a weired idea that i got but it's pretty good me thinks, i cant really say anymore or it will give the next chapter away lol but anyway read the prologue and enjoy being left on a cliff hanger lol XD the narrator is Bella by the way =]
I looked down at my blooded right arm, the bite marks were swollen like a balloon, and they were a vicious angry red. My arm was numb- as if someone had injected morphine into me a dozen times over. The pain from the puncture started to fade, and I thought it was over. A fire blazed through the veins in my arm and danced on my fingertips, threatening to explode them one by one. The numbness did nothing to stop me feeling the roaring flames course through my veins, all it did was paralyze me.
I new pain erupted throughout my entire body, totally subsiding the morphine. It felt like this new pain was the result of every single one of my bones cracking and twisting into new shapes, each one more painful that the other.
Black dots fizzled onto my vision and blurred. My head became abnormally heavy and my body swayed. I crashed to the floor and the last thing I saw was a pool of my own blood.
What do ya think she's been bitten by? don't hesitate to let me know and new chapter will be posted within the next few days, =]