All right, this was my first story ever. As such, it has been published so that other Authors do not make the same mistakes as I did. Questions and comments are welcome. Again, this document is not a story, but a catalogue of what NOT to do. Aside from black notes, the rest is in its original format.
Here is my first story. I'll accept criticism but not flames:
There are many Stars, and many worlds
All growing and learning in there own way.
Some of these planets make contact with each other, a few at the beginning of there existence most towards the end and someā¦never.
Here is one race however that is far different from all others, these beings possessed great power and once sought to protect the all other worlds form evil both within and withought. For centuries this world fought the myriad of different villains that inevitably arose from the trillions of different planets they protected acting from within the shadows never observed by the inhabitance of the many worlds.
However, as time went on, many in this world began to believe that the planets should learn to defend themselves and that the Peacebringers, as they were called, should only observe. For a time these voice were few but as decade turned to century and century to eon they grew in number. As this group began to increase in size, less and less support was given to the defense of the hundreds of planets and worlds that the Peacebringers defended. Eventually, as support began to seep away altogether, many feared that the planets would soon come to ruin.
However, they were wrong, Heroes began to arise from there respective worlds.
Fighting evil where ever they observed it. Not all succeeded and some were destroyed but the majority of the worlds lived in peace.
As the Peacebringers saw this they began to take more pleasure in observing rather than acting. And began to record the history of these heroes and villains. Time continued to pass and the Peacebringers began to interact with the worlds differently than before. Where as once the protected the plants, now they did what ever pleased them selves, helping either hero or villain as they saw fit.
Eventually a tournament was organized to determine who, in the eyes of the Peacebringers, was the greatest among all the heroes and villains in the universe.
Participation was optional but most excepted, and only the greatest heroes were allowed to compete. The grounds that held the many battles of the tournament were randomly picked form each of the player's home worlds and often the Peacebringers would supply random items for the participants to use. The one that is dubbed the winner of this tournament was granted their hearts greatest wish within the realm of the planet they lived upon.
The winners of the previous tournaments were given the choice to participate in future tournaments, without receiving the wish
These competitions were called "Smash" tournaments because of the incredible ferocity needed to win the prize at the end.
The time for the next tournament has come.
And that's it for now; this story will contain all the characters that I think should be SSM manly characters form the Mega Man Zero series and more from the Sonic Games.
Updates will follow.
Ok, I know for a fact that I re-wrote this chapter three times, until it was at the format it is now.
The Problem, it had already been published at the time of its editing,
That's right folks, I changed up the story on my readers in the middle of their reading. That is error number one.
