heyy you guys, I just wanna say something before you scroll down.
There may be some grammar mistakes in this story because I'm from the Netherlands and I'm in eight grade and the english level on my school isn't very high. So I'm sorry for that
also this is my first story so I would like to hear what you think about my writing
Enjoy!
"The One Thing"
The moment that I saw the love of my life and my biggest fear fight I suddenly realised that there was something I could do to save him.
Because at that moment I understood why she had done it, I suddenly understood how helpless she must have been. Because I was in the same position right now.
The Third Woman had seen her husband, whom she loved so much, fight with the unknown thing and known that he was losing this battle. The battle who her sons had so bravely begun. The battle that had killed them so quickly, right before her own eye had she seen her own flesh and blood die and there was nothing she could do about it.
But then when she watched her husband lose this fight of life and death, she thought that there was one thing she could do. One thing that could make a difference. One thing that could save her husband. That was all she could think about. "not him."
And with those last thought the Third Woman had ran forward and picked up the knife. When she stood one meter for the Cold Woman she looked at her husband for the last time. And then she pushed the knife through her heart. Because she was willing to give her life for her husband and the people of the village. And her trick had worked. The Cold Woman was distracted because of her blood, and she was easily killed.
In the split second that Bella had realised all of that she also had noticed that Edward and Victoria still were fighting and that she still had no idea who was winning.
There was only one thing she could do to make sure that Edward would survive this,
The one thing the Third Woman did and the one thing she could do. The one thing she would do.
And with that thought she fell to the ground. Looking for something sharp with her hands. Desperate she shove her hands in the snow. Then she finally found a sharp stone.
She picked it up and looked at the fight. She still couldn't see who was winning or losing. She could only hear some growling and a frightening ripping noise. Quickly she stood and pressed it against her skin. The stone felt cold against her warm skin. And with her eyes fixed on the fight she pressed harder. And then suddenly as if someone had pressed the pause button, Victoria and Edward both stood still. Both looking at her. But she only look at Edward. Just as Victoria begun moving towards her, completely distracted by her blood, Edward begun moving too. He sprung on her neck and began ripping her head of.
Just as Victoria realised what was happening, a loud ripping noise filled the air. Edward threw her head at the ground. Without looking back at the separate head and body, he took a lighter from his pocket and set it on fire. And then he lifted his head and finally look me in the eye. "you shouldn't have done that" "I couldn't just stand here and watch you die" "Bella…" he began but she cut him off "I love you" and for a moment he was silent, he just looked her in the eye deeply, he looked in to her soul. And after a few moments he said them, those three words Bella craved to hear, those three simple yet powerful words
"I love you"
well? was it good? I'm hoping to get some reviews!
this thing just came into my head and I had to write it down, I don't really know if I'm gonna write something else.
I just wil see, so maybe!
love yaa all!
Twilightie88
