A rewrite of Into Darkness for my storyline... if you haven't watched the movie you don't wanna read this... *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* *SPOILERS* Um yeah, there's spoilers, I'm rewriting the movie.
This is part 2 of the "Long December" series. Part one: Say You'll Haunt me. Part three: Leave Out All The Rest.
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the first chapter is stuff I'm not rewriting but including because it's part of the movie.
"Damn it, man! That was our ride! You just stunned our ride!"
"Oh, great. Run!"
"What the hell did you take?"
"I have no idea, but they were bowing to it. Kirk to Shuttle One. Locals are out of the kill zone. You are clear. Repeat. Spock, get in there, neutralize the volcano and let's get out of here."
"We have to do this now! I told the Captain the shuttle wasn't built for this kind of heat."
"Captain, did the indigenous life forms see you?"
"No, Mr. Spock, they did not."
"The Prime Directive clearly states there can be no interference with the internal development of alien civilizations."
"I know what it says! Which is why I'm running through the jungle wearing a disguise! Now drop off your super ice cube and let's go! Kirk out!"
"You're good."
"If we're gonna do this, we've got to do it now! This ash is killing our coils."
"You sure you don't want me to go instead?"
"That would be highly illogical as I am already outfitted-"
"Spock, I was kidding. You got this."
"Guys! We have to go! Now!"
"They're trying to kill us! They're trying to kill us, Jim!"
"I'll see you in ninety seconds."
"Do it, do it!"
"Prerequisite change, two seven three... I can't hold this position. Spock, I've got to pull you back up."
"Negative. This is our only chance to save this species. If this volcano erupts, the planet dies."
"Pull him back up. Now!"
"Spock, are you okay?"
"I am, surprisingly, alive. Stand by."
"We have to get him back. I'll suit up. I'm gonna go down."
"We have to abandon the shuttle."
"We can't just leave him, Sulu!"
"We don't have a choice! Uhura, I'm sorry."
"Spock, we're going back to the Enterprise. We'll get you out of there."
"Captain, I'm ditching the shuttle. You've got to make it to the Enterprise on your own."
"Wonderful!"
"Uhura! You ready to swim?"
"I'm ready."