HI EVERYONE :)
Vixy here or should I say the Gothic Lolita! But seriously Vixy here :)
I'm here with my 3rd fanfic. It's gonna be a story of developing love between Alfred and Arthur. Kinda begans with America cleaning his storage room and goes on from there! Ah ~ Guilt and love is shown and opens up a whole new world of possibilities 3
There are gonna be two versons of this story -
"Can you feel me at all?" is Alfred-Kun's POV
"I never knew you felt this way!" is Arthur-Kun's POV
(It's probably best to start with Alfreds POV first though
I do not own Hetalia but if i did then there would be a new set of series of Hetalia Love which all nation couples! Mmm maybe I will make a fan series sometime. If you want that then prease but that in your review :3 get it prease ~ (Japan/Kiku reference)
Warnings: Very intensive moments, sad scenes and some smexy fluff later on in the series (i will change the rating when that happen's though)
I never once thought about how love for people began...
I knew how my love for hamburgers came though hehe, but to be honest nothing beats my heart so well then wanting to be with someone. I mean I know i'm young and all, but hearing France talk about amore and seeing how Finland and Sweden are slowly warming up to each others embraces, really makes me realise that I am lonely.
It only occurred to me in dream mode. I went to sleep around 11pm after eating two hamburgers and 3 sodas - they say that eating bad before bed can give you nightmares - but the dream I had wasn't a nightmare, more of a realisation. So dude, I had been eating at McDonalds in the dream when my boss came by and said,
"America, I know this is sudden but I'm having problams with my wife and wanted to know what your thoughts were on how love begins and ends.." however I did not know how to answer him in due to me never being in love so I said,
"I'm sorry dude, but I've never been in love so..." He stopped me in my tracks and said,
"Then you will be alone for life if you do not learn the facts of life. How love begins! hopefully if your lucky enough you won't learn the factcs of how it end's" Then I woke up in a sweaty state. Huffing and puffing like i'd been on the treadmill at Arthurs. He had always forced me to go on one after eating a McDonalds. Speaking of Britian, I also did not really dream a lot so when I did have this dream my thoughts went straight to him. Arthur always used to tell tales of amazing dreams and how it came in with his witchcraft.
I wanted to see him do a spell or two just to see if he was kidding or not, but he'd always just shake his head and say no. Arthur told me that it was kinda dark magic and that he didn't want me to be caught up in his rituals because he was scared that some sort of underworld creature would get me while he was unaware of the forces around him, but another part of his magic is light. He told me that he knew some old british wish spells that a magical creature called Mint Bunny told him as a kid. To bring one dreams, He told me that one on the day I was adopted and it worked. I always belived though it was just out of joy of not being alone.
It's silly because I woke up and thought that maybe he was doing one of those to get me to stop eating a lot, because I was in McDonalds in the dream. Love however wasn't a thing that we would ever talk about and Arthur once said to France that he wasn't interested in love because he thought he was too old and was fine with being himself and having the company of other nations. He never wanted to get involved with that emotion because he said that when I was a kid that I was like his son and that having some woman would make me uncomfortable, even now I heard that he can't bear to fall in love with a person...
So that's what stroke me as odd. One, the fact that I had a dream in over 10 years (last one was as a kid, the day I was adopted) and Two, that it wouldn't be England causing it by his so called magic because of what it was about. So that's why I just thought of it as a realisation that I was indeed lonely. I mean Canda is my bro although everytime I see him it's like he isn't there. He's so quiet and just talks to that polar bear teddy of his.
Love eh? I know though, that I'll never be the perfect partner with my habbits and the way I eat, Who would want me?
So I just ignored the dream, went downstairs. had some soda and microwave chips and watched TV until lunchtime when Lithuania came by to clean like he does once a month and to borrow some books, while he was busy dusting the hallways I decided it was time to do some cleaning of my old storage room...
Ok so I know the prologue is really short and bad, but I promice chapter 1 will be longer and will actually start the story. This was just his morning realisation! Otherwise I think the grammer is really good. It's 11pm over here so I've spent the last half an hour sorting it out :D
So yeah please review and of course tell me if I should use old clips and images to make a new fan series :3 because I love hearing inspiring comments!
I know this may seem strange, I was trying to go for the whole Alfred POV but think I failed at catching his way of speaking :(
I'll try harder guys!
Alfred: Well I'm not one for reading but this is definitely what I would do in this situation :)
Arthur: Hmph! Well for one thing Mint bunny and my magic is real so there!
Alfred: Ok dude, what ever you say...
Vixy: Awww come on you two hug and make up :D
Arthur: No, I think we can just shake hands. He's not a child anymore.
Alfred: Aww! But Iggy, just yesterday you called me a childish eater.
Arthur: Well you eat like a pig and then you puked. That is childish behavior!
Alfred: So dude, can I have a hug?
Arthur: NO!
Vixy: Aww those to are so cute 3
Now please enjoy the next chapter where there is a proper story line ~