Anthro Evolution

(the title is the hardest thing to think of (open to suggestions for a better one)

Author's note: This is in English (UK)

I got the idea for this story after reading the Outcast Bandicoot series by Tara Cross. The story takes place a few months after OB3 but before the Lost Bandicoot series was added to the Outcast Bandicoot series. If you want to read the stories up to the events in this one just go to www(dot)outcastbandicoot(dot)xtremeisland(dot)com and read all the outcast bandicoot stories just up to the end of 'Outcast Bandicoot 3'.

The story includes a theory about the crystals and their involvement with the earth's 'ley lines and how the islands and Madame Amberley's academy for e.v.i.l (Eductaion of Villainous and Intellectual Learners) has remained hidden from the outside world. I also thought I would expand on some of the characters such as Tropy being from the future and us not really knowing that much about him or what he used to do in the future before he made his time machine and why his skin was blue. I also put some story into Neo when he was younger and how an event that happened at the academy will lead to his downfall (?). I guess I've put quite a bit of realism in the story explaining why the islands have never been discovered by the Australian or New Zealand navy, or by any satellites, until now and how they got around the world in previous adventures without being noticed.

Please let me know what you readers think and if there are any artists from Deviant Art who happen read this and get any ideas from this story feel free to do illustrations just be sure to let me know and mention where you got the idea from.

Story update 3/03/09:

I am currently reconstructing the entire story layout because after thinking about it, i don't think anyone would want to read a story continuously for 30000 words or so, so I am going to give each scene its own chapter but they'll have no title.

Story update 8/3/09:

Ok I have finally finished part one now and I'm working on part two. Hope you enjoy it and please feel free to review.

PLEASE R+R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!