So, here is my fist fanfic which I wrote in English. It's about Sirius, who is standing in front of the house of Lily and James after they have been killed. I found it rather depressing, but when I read it a second time, I couldn't see why.
Well, I hope you like it. Please help me with the mistakes, I'm from Germany and only have been learning English for about 5,5 years now. I'd love to get many reviews!
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to JK Rowling (wow, who would have thought this???)
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All my fault
Here again...
When was the last time?
Yesterday?
Yeah, yesterday.
After the charm had been done successfully.
If only I had known...
But, we all trusted him.
We all did.
Why did he had to do this?
Why?
And it's all my fault.
All.
Everything.
I should have done it myself.
If I had not been so stupid, they still would live.
Did I really trust Peter more than myself?
Yes, I did...
I can't deal with pain.
I would have told everything.
But Peter...
He was used to it.
He was always loyal.
Yeah, loyal.
But loyal to the wrong man.
Why did he have to do this?
Well, it wasn't his fault, that I trusted him.
I should have listened to Dumbledore.
But I was blind.
It was so obviously, but I didn't want to see it.
I wanted that everything would stay like it was.
I was so stupid.
And now they are dead.
And it is all my fault...