Hi everybody! This is All Character's Clash Revised Edition!! Isn't that special! I cannot believe it's been a YEAR since I finished All Character's Clash! Lets get on with this shall we?
Spark: CG owns nothing except Krystle, Arielle and Andrea.
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Peach hummed happily as she strode about her castle, Mario was away for the afternoon. So she had a little time for herself. She suddenly heard a loud noise from her room. Naturally she went up to look and see what it was.
She opened the door slowly to see a gargantuan man standing in front of the broken stained glass window. He was shrouded in darkness and she couldn't see his face but she could tell he had red hair and a muscular frame. She gulped and remembered for a second that Mario wasn't here to save her....she was in trouble. Peach then attempted to scream, but couldn't find her voice.
"Got ya!"the man chuckled, Peach attempted to jump out of the way, but he threw a net over her and knocked her unconscious. "Bowser's gonna pay me big bucks for you" he snickered, and jumped out the window to his black horse several stories below, and rode off.
They rode many miles and across a canyon until they reached a strip of country. Something frightened the horse and it bucked knocking Peach off of it's back. A silhouette against the setting sun, of someone else was coming. The horse was panicked and when ordered to stop it ran through cornfield to his left, leaving Peach behind.
The person coming was actually the prince of Altea, Marth.
"Huh?"he asked while looking around, before jumping off his horse. "Steady, Lightning steady"he murmured to his who horse sensing evil all around this place. Marth unsheathed Falchion and used it to cut the net away. Seeing it was only a girl with no weapons he put it away. After looking around again he picked her up and set her across the saddle and getting up on it himself, before striding off.
Later that day...
"Hey, can you hear me?"Marth asked as Peach opened her eyes.
She looked around at the sky blue walls and realized instantly she wasn't at her castle and that a Toad wasn't talking to her. She turned her head slowly to face her rescuer.
"Are you alright?" he questioned.
"I think so"she replied although she had a throbbing headache."Who are you?"she figured she had a right to know, "and where am I?"
"I'm Prince Marth and your in my castle"he said, "Who, may I ask, are you?"
"I would be Princess Peach of the Mushroom Kingdom. What city would this be?"
"Altea"he said proudly. She nodded to acknowledge what he said though her headache was making it difficult to think.
"By the way, I'm sorry to be so inquiring but how did you get me away from that man?"
"What man?"he asked puzzled.
"Never mind"she said shaking her head painfully. Marth was always taught to pay the upmost respect to women.
"Are you alright?"he asked again.
"Yeah, I just have a headache"she said weakly.
"Well, I guess you should rest. Feel free to stay as long as necessary"he said leaving the room quietly.
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Well I like this a lot better...Marth's not all OH MY GOD! and Peach isn't all like OH MY GOD, I'M SUCH A WEAKLING, PROTECT ME! Basically they're a bit more in character don't ya think? Well I'll update soon right now I need to get to flag practice!!#runs out of house#REVIEW!!
Spark: CG owns nothing except Krystle, Arielle and Andrea.
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Peach hummed happily as she strode about her castle, Mario was away for the afternoon. So she had a little time for herself. She suddenly heard a loud noise from her room. Naturally she went up to look and see what it was.
She opened the door slowly to see a gargantuan man standing in front of the broken stained glass window. He was shrouded in darkness and she couldn't see his face but she could tell he had red hair and a muscular frame. She gulped and remembered for a second that Mario wasn't here to save her....she was in trouble. Peach then attempted to scream, but couldn't find her voice.
"Got ya!"the man chuckled, Peach attempted to jump out of the way, but he threw a net over her and knocked her unconscious. "Bowser's gonna pay me big bucks for you" he snickered, and jumped out the window to his black horse several stories below, and rode off.
They rode many miles and across a canyon until they reached a strip of country. Something frightened the horse and it bucked knocking Peach off of it's back. A silhouette against the setting sun, of someone else was coming. The horse was panicked and when ordered to stop it ran through cornfield to his left, leaving Peach behind.
The person coming was actually the prince of Altea, Marth.
"Huh?"he asked while looking around, before jumping off his horse. "Steady, Lightning steady"he murmured to his who horse sensing evil all around this place. Marth unsheathed Falchion and used it to cut the net away. Seeing it was only a girl with no weapons he put it away. After looking around again he picked her up and set her across the saddle and getting up on it himself, before striding off.
Later that day...
"Hey, can you hear me?"Marth asked as Peach opened her eyes.
She looked around at the sky blue walls and realized instantly she wasn't at her castle and that a Toad wasn't talking to her. She turned her head slowly to face her rescuer.
"Are you alright?" he questioned.
"I think so"she replied although she had a throbbing headache."Who are you?"she figured she had a right to know, "and where am I?"
"I'm Prince Marth and your in my castle"he said, "Who, may I ask, are you?"
"I would be Princess Peach of the Mushroom Kingdom. What city would this be?"
"Altea"he said proudly. She nodded to acknowledge what he said though her headache was making it difficult to think.
"By the way, I'm sorry to be so inquiring but how did you get me away from that man?"
"What man?"he asked puzzled.
"Never mind"she said shaking her head painfully. Marth was always taught to pay the upmost respect to women.
"Are you alright?"he asked again.
"Yeah, I just have a headache"she said weakly.
"Well, I guess you should rest. Feel free to stay as long as necessary"he said leaving the room quietly.
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Well I like this a lot better...Marth's not all OH MY GOD! and Peach isn't all like OH MY GOD, I'M SUCH A WEAKLING, PROTECT ME! Basically they're a bit more in character don't ya think? Well I'll update soon right now I need to get to flag practice!!#runs out of house#REVIEW!!