Hey this is my first fan fiction ever so flames sting but are excepted and tips are cool too! This is basically what I think would happen if Percy decided to become a God with some mad Annabeth hope you like it! Also this will be a very short chapter because its up to you if i keep it!
-Geekchick202
During LO
Paper, paper, ah! Rights to Bella…no Percy Jackson…damn!
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In throne room…
Percy pov
"I know what you will ask. The greatest gift of all. Yes, if you wish it, it shall be yours, Percy Jackson if you want it you may be made a god."(A/N: sorry I shortened it I'm kinda tight on time…)
I couldn't believe what I had just herd. Me a god! It was like a dream. Before I could give it any more thought my immediate response was something like um…oookaaaayyy. Then I thought of Annabeth and how she had almost risked her life to save me. Before I could say anything else all of the gods had their hands palm up facing me and I was hit with a bolt of energy so strong I fell to the ground. When I got up I herd the booming voice of my father, Poseidon.
"All hale Perseus Jackson minor god of the sea!"
The room erupted with cheers around me, but when I turned to look at Annabeth her beautiful features were composed into an emotionless mask. It hurt to see the pain in her eyes, if I hadn't been being hugged and clapped on the back from Zeus knows who I would've ran up to her then and told her how much I loved her but before I could even call out her name she rushed out of the throne room with a wild look in her eyes. I ran after her everyone else in the throne room wearing a very confused expression.
"ANNABETH!" I called out, I didn't even get a response. The last image I had was of her tear streaked face behind the closing elevator doors…
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So what do you think! I'm honestly really iffy about the story so tell me what you think, should I end it or keep writing? The power is in your hands!