Another Kipper rewrite, this time it's the episode "The Camping Trip. Enjoy and comment.
One sunny day, Tiger was riding his bicycle up Big Hill. He felt exhausted as he approached the top,
When he reached the top, he pedaled back down again, all the way to Kipper's house.
Meanwhile, Kipper the Dog was watching golf on television when the doorbell rang.
"Hello Tiger! You look exhausted."
"Exhausted? No! Want to come camping?"
"Sure!" said Kipper.
"All I need to do is get my tent, some food and some sticks for a fire at home."
"Sounds good then!"
Soon the two friends collected everything they needed to go camping. Kipper and Tiger biked all the way up to Big Hill.
"Well, here we are." said Tiger. "Let's set up camp here."
Tiger set up the tent, but had trouble setting it up.
"Can you pass me a pole?" asked Tiger.
Kipper gave Tiger a pole, but bumped Tiger in the head with it.
"Sorry Tiger!"
Soon the tent was all set up.
"Let's go inside!" said Tiger.
They soon went into the tent.
"Wonderful isn't it?"
"Yes it is." said Kipper. "But I'm hungry."
"So am I." said Tiger.
They had a lovely dinner of cheeseburgers and hot dogs with potato chips and soda.
After dinner, they decided to look at the stars.
"How many stars do you think there are?" asked Kipper.
"Billions, maybe even trillions." replied Tiger.
But Kipper didn't answer. He was sound asleep,
Then there was trouble. Huge storm clouds began rolling in, and then, it started to rain! Kipper soon woke up.
"What was that?" he asked.
Then, he noticed the rain.
"Oh no!" cried Kipper. It's raining!"
"Guess we better go inside!" said Tiger.
Worse was to follow. A loud thunderclap startled the two friends, and then the tent blew away in the storm, trapping the two friends in the rain.
"We better find some shelter, and fast!" said Kipper.
But the two friends fell down a hole, and ended up inside a rabbit burrow!"
Just then, a little rabbit came over to Kipper and gave him a hug. Then he ran away.
"I guess he wants us to follow him!" said Kipper.
The rabbit led him to even more rabbits, all who were very happy to see them.
One of the rabbits even gave Kipper a carrot!
Soon the two friends fell sound asleep inside the rabbit hole.