ok this is my first fan fic. so if you would comment it would be great. i know the story isn't so great and the chapters are kinda short, but feed back would be nice. thanks. - emma

Chapter1: the start

"Ok, I'll see you at the movie tonight, I guess" I said to Jennifer.

"Alright, see you, Brea!" she called back, she was already walking away.

I headed towards the parking lot so I could go home. I got in my car and drove slowly away, thinking about what to wear. I walked through the door and just decided to wear my red shirt and my dark jeans, when the phone rang. I walked to the kitchen to get the phone, it was my mom, and she called to tell me she was going on a business trip for the next two weeks. I told her alright and then she hung up.

She was always going on trips, so it wasn't too unusual. I got dressed and got in my car to go pick up Jen.

"Hey Brea, lets go." She said

"Ok" I replied.

"The movie doesn't start for an hour, what you want to do?" she asked

"I don't know, I guess I could just walk around for a bit." I said

"Alright I'll go look at some shops, I'll meet you at the theater" she said

"Alright, I'll see you in a bit" I replied as I was walking away.

About fifteen minutes had passed when I realized it was dark and I was lost. I wasn't looking where I was going. I was headed down a dark unlit street. The first lights I saw were three blocks away.

I saw a man and decided to ask for directions.

"Excuse me, sir; I was wondering if you knew, perhaps, where we are, or how to get to the movie theater?"

"It just so happens, I do." He answered in an attractive voice, and with a just as attractive smile.

"Can you tell me?" I asked

"I don't think I will" he replied. I didn't know what he meant by that, but I was sure it was a threat.

"W-w-why not?" I said in a weak voice.

He just chuckled and said "I have other plans for you"

That made me nervous, I thought about running, but that wouldn't work, I was the slowest person in my gym class. That plan was out. Screaming won't work either, my throat was dry, plus, no one would hear. So I tried option one, I ran as fast as I could down the empty street , but he was faster, way faster, blindingly, inhumanly fast. I ran the other direction, but he was there when I turned. So I stood in place, and he lunged into me, I hit the ground, and then I was out, it was all black.