A Nobody's Love
Kitty: REWRITTEN! Because I didn't like the flow of the plot in the first one OTL Althought my English and organization haven't improved that much….
Kiki: Matt is in college and refuses to help with yaoi yes?
Kitty: Yes. WARNING: YAOI! Mmkay just don't blame me if u hate yaoi xD
Kiki: Disclaimer: Kitty does not own Kingdom Hearts. If she did the characters would be OOC all the time -3-
Summary: Sora and the gang meet a young boy. In a black coat. And one whom knows Roxas. Warning: Boy Love RoxasxOC yaoi.
The journey was over now. The battle to save the worlds was finally over. Sora smiled. Xemnas was finally defeated. Riku, Kairi and Sora were finally reunited. Finally back on Destiny Island. Everything was as they should be. It was all finally over. Or so they thought,
Riku stretched his arms.
"Yo Sora. Let's go back to the islands and have a match." He said trying to tempt Sora. It worked. Sora smiled.
"Alright. I'll beat you though." He said confidently. Riku rolled his eyes.
"Someone seems confident in himself." He said sarcastically. Sora smirked.
"Let's rewind shall we? Who's ass did I kick in Hollow Bastion again?" Sora said hoping to stir Riku. It worked. Riku scowled. Kairi rolled her eyes but giggled.
"Here we go again." Kairi said to herself as she looked over at the bickering friends smiling.
"Hey! That Ansem guy was controlling me! It doesn't count!" he was quick to defend himself. Sora just smiled. Riku frowned.
"Oi don't look like you won! I'll beat you this time!" Riku declared as he ran for the boats. Sora laughed and ran towards him. Kairi soon followed after them.
"Yea right!" Everything was ok. Everything was back to normal.
It was perfect.
As they reached shore of the island and got off, Sora spotted a peron. Were they from here? Sora certainly didn't remember them. But then Sora looked at their attire. A black coat with a hoodie over their face, obscuring anyone's view of their face. Sora frowned. An organization member? The organization is still alive? That can't be true. Kairi and Riku were also aware of the person's choice of attire and had their keyblade summoned. But Sora didn't summon his yet. Why does this presence feel so familiar?
"Who are you?" Riku demanded. The person was obviously startled from hearing Riku's voice for it showed as he jumped slightly. The cloaked person turned around and dodged as Riku wasted no time in swinging his keyblade at him. The cloacked person's hood fell and Sora's eyes landed on a familiar but not so familiar face.
It was a boy. He looked around their age. He had pure black locks with a single purple streak on his head. Why was he so familiar? Then Sora thought of Roxas. Could this be someone Roxas thought strongly of? The boy seemed to be staring at him. His face held no traces of emotion, but Sora could tell from the boy's eyes. He had lively and vivid blue eyes. They were masked with pain, shocked and anger. A name popped up in his head.
"Chiro?" Sora asked. Said boy flinched when Sora called out his name. Riku and Kairi looked at Sora.
"You know him?" Riku asked. Sora shook his head. How did he know?
"But… I think Roxas knows him." He said as he walked up to Chiro. Chiro stood stiffly where he was as Sora approached him.
"Chiro.. is your name right?" Sora said uncertainly. Chiro looked up at Sora. Those eyes. That hair. It reminded him of someone. A name spilled from his lip.
"Roxas…" it flew out of the boy's mouth, gently and lovingly. It was then Sora knew. Roxas knew this kid really well. Chiro chewed his lip and looked into Sora's eyes.
"Roxas." It didn't sound loving or gentle anymore. Chiro said it as if it was vemon in his mouth. Sora grew curious of the boy's reaction. Did something happen?
"Chiro?" he asked uncertainly as he reached his hand out to reach out for the boy. Reach out for the boy who had lost someone. A friend. Chiro slapped Sora's hand away as it came up to his face.
"You lied Roxas." Chiro said through his clenched teeth. Sora felt a pang in his heart. What lie? Why was Sora so conflicted? What had Roxas done?
"Huh?" he asked. Chiro summoned his scythe and ran at Sora. Sora noticed that the color of Chiro's eyes turned a dangerous red. Sora quickly summoned his keyblade to block the attack. Chiro's face was so close. Too close. Sora could see the emotion in his eyes. Betrayal. Despair. Sadness. Sora could also see the tears glistening in his eyes.
"A lie?" Sora asked while Chiro continued to hack at his defense. He was strong, Sora had to admit. But he was stronger.
"You lied to me Roxas! You promised you'd come back to me!" Chiro shouted as he continued to fight Sora. Seeing how Sora couldn't just stay in a defensive mode Sora fought back but not enough to hurt Chiro. Something inside of him kept himself from seriously hurting Chiro. Was is Roxas?
"You lied. You''re nothing but a liar!" That's not true. Sora was confused by the inner voice. It's you isn't it Roxas?Chiro's eyes glistened with tears but none fell.
"I hate you." Sora's heart felt a tug. Chiro continued to chant those words as he continued to strike at Sora. Each word emphasized by his scythe coming down on Sora's keyblade.
"I hate you. I hate you. I hate you!" Chiro screamed nearly in hysteria . Sora felt something within him trying to get out. Roxas? Sora felt Roxas leave his body and manifest in front of him. Still transparent, but seeable. Chiro stopped striking and stared at Roxas in shock. There was a pause.
Suddenly Riku joined in and knocked Chiro back. Chiro gasped as the keyblade connected with his chest and send him flying back, his scythe flying from his grip and far from his reach.
Riku charged at Chiro. Roxas looked at them in horror and ran at them.
"No!" he cried. Sora ran as well.
"Riku! Don't hurt him!" Sora cried out to his friend as Riku began to strike at Chiro. The keyblade stopped above Chiro's chest as Riku turned to give his best friend a questioning glaze. Chiro was also slightly surprised as he looked toward Sora. But when he saw Roxas his eyes hardened. He looked over at Riku who was staring straight at him, not knowing what to do.
"Well what are you waiting for?" he yelled. "Finish me off now!" he cried. Sora didn't know why Chiro wanted to die so badly.
"Chiro. Please…" Roxas pleaded as he neared Chiro and reached his transparent arm out to reach for Chiro. Chiro glared at him.
"No! I don't want to hear anymore! You're a liar Roxas! You lied to me!" Chiro screamed as he slapped at Roxas's hand even though it just went right pass Roxas' hand. Roxas looked at Chiro sadly.
"I didn't mean to Chiro. Please listen to me." He tried to reason. Sora knew Roxas was sad, the part of his heart that held Roxas in it throbbed painfully. But Sora guiltily wanted to know. What had happened between Roxas and Chiro? Chiro shook his head in rage.
"No! I'm done listening to you! I don't want to hear anymore of your lies! I hate you!" Chiro cried as he backed away from Roxas, getting closer to Riku. Sora diodn't know what he was planning, but he Chiro had no weapon to use to fight so he wasn't worried. He was more worried of the way Chiro eyed Riku's keyblade.
"Chiro… please." Roxas said his name. Chiro felt tears welled up in his eyes. Chiro turned away from Roxas.
"I want to be far from you. I just came to say one thing to you."
"Chiro. Please. Just let me explain!" he cried, he tried to place his hand on Chiro's shoulder but his hand just went through him. Before anyone could move, Chiro swiped Riku's keyblade out of his hand. Sora and Kairi prepared their Keyblades to fight Chiro but Chiro just jumped back, further away from them.
"There's nothing to explain!" he yelled angrily. That's when his tears came out. Chiro sobbed. "I hate you Roxas." He cried. "I really hate you. I hate you! I hate you!" Chiro yelled repeating over and over that he hated Roxas.
"I wanted to say one thing to you before I go." Chiro said as he lifted Riku's keyblade up Sora knew what he was going to do. Sora's face paled. Roxas also had an idea of what he was going to do. He also paled.
"Wait Chiro! No!" but it was too late.
"Goodbye."Before anyone could react Chiro trusted Riku's keyblade into his own chest. Chiro gasped and flinched in pain. Sora, Roxas and the others looked at Chiro in horror as Chirofell to his knees as he started fading away. Sora felt tears run down his eyes. Was he crying for both Roxas and himself?
Chiro saw himself fade away. Chiro let out a pained smile. A forced one. He wasn't going to have to face Roxas or Sora again. He just hoped it would be brighter on the other side.
Roxas desperately reached his transparent hand out to grab Chiro to keep him here in this world. To pull him back.
"No Chiro please!" He screamed as he let the tears fall freely But it was too late. Chiro had gone. Roxas dropped to his knees. Staring at the place Chiro disappeared Roxas started to tremble. He cried. Sora came up to his nobody and put a comforting hand on him even though it went through.
It's time to reunited though.
I'm sorry Chiro Please don't leave. You can't be dead!
He's gone.
"Chiro…" Roxas sobbed. He chanted that name the whole time he and Sora merged back into one body. Kairi was also sobbing while Riku stared at the ground in shock and also affected by what had happened.
Sora and the others stared at where Chiro had disappeared. All this time Sora didn't stop crying. You couldn't blame him. This kind of saddening thing didn't happen often. Kairi went up to Sora and hugged him. Riku continued to stare at the place Chiro disappeared.
"Who was he?" he asked. Sora shook his head.
"I don't know. Maybe a best friend of Roxas." He cried. He was more then that.
"Pull yourself together guys. It won't be the last time you see him." A voice came from behind them. They whipped their heads around to see…
"Your majesty!" Sora cried as he bowed. King Mickey waved his hand telling Sora not to be so formal. Riku stared at King Mickey.
"How long have you been there Your majesty?" exclaimed Sora through his tears. King Mickey looked down at the ground in sadness.
"Long enough to see that."
"What are you talking about?" he asked. "We just saw him disappear." King Mickey nodded.
"I saw him too. But he isn't like other nobodies. He'll be back." King Mickey told them. Sora wiped his tears away and couldn't help but he happy that it wasn't the last of Chiro. He's alive!
"Will we be able to see him?" Sora asked the King. "What do you mean he's not like other nobodies?"
King Mickey shook his head.
"That I don't know yet most records on him on Ansem's computer is locked away. I still have to hack into it." He said. Sora hung his head. Kairi spoke up.
"Your Majesty. What brings you here?" she asked. King Mickey looked at them.
"Oh I almost forgot! Sora, Riku, Kairi! The adventure is not over yet!" he exclaimed.
5 seconds of silence later.
"What?" cried Sora. "What do you mean?" Sora exclaimed. Mickey sighed.
"There's a new threat. A new enemy to be exact. Like Xemnas and Maleficent he is also after Kingdom Hearts." He explained.
Sora hung his head. Just when he though everything had calm down, a new threat appears.
King Mickey smiled. "But it won't be a while until he acts. So rest up until the time comes." He said. Sora looked at the king. "How long?" he aksed. King Mickey shooked his head. "I'm afraid I don't know. But when the time comes Donald and Goofy will pick you guys up on the gummi ship." He said.
Sora, Riku and Kairi nodded. They stared at the spot Chiro faded. Sora hoped what the king said was true and that Chiro was still alive. He's alive. Sora yawned. Man he was tired now. Sora put his arms behind his neck.
"Well im tired." He said. Kairi laughed.
"First to get back to the mainland wins." She yelled as she made her way to her boat.
"Hey that's not fair!" Sora cried and he and Riku ran after her. Sora knew Roxas was still sad. Part of him still was. But there was no point to meddle in sadness if what the king says is true. I can see Chiro again. Sora smiled as Roxas seemed to repeat it over and over again. That's right, We'll see him again. I'll help you fix your broken relationship with Chiro. Sora thought as he ran towards their boats.
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Chiro's body felt weightless. He was floating…but where? Chiro looked around him. He saw nothing but the dark that surrounded him. It was trying to comsume him.
"Hnn I figured as much." Chiro said as he let himself float.
Fret not little one. [Who said I was fretting.]
Chiro opened his eyes and looked around. He wasn't alone
You're not alone here.
"W-Who's there?" he cried looking around seeing no one.
You're not dead yet Chiro. It's not your time to die yet. Your destiny has not been fulfilled young one. [Who are you?]
Chiro looked wildly around. Suddenly a flash of white surrounded him. Chiro shielded his eyes as the warm and bright light surrounded him. He was falling.
Chiro landed with a thud. Chiro groanded in pain, luckily there were cardboard boxes that softened his landing…but barely. Chiro got up and scanned his surroundings. He had been here before, but what was the name again? Sure Chiro jumped worlds to find out what happened to Roxas, but he never bothered to remember the worlds' names. Chiro's facial expression soured as he remembered Roxas.
"You promise you'll come back to me right?"
"Of course I promise. I'll never leave you."
"Ok… just hurry on back afterwards."
Chiro felt tears welled up in his tears. [You promised me. Why'd you break it?] He furiously wiped his tears away away. Forget about him. Chiro looked around. Who was that? He suddenly felt a sharp pain in his head. He cluthed the side of his head. Pain. That was all he felt right now. Chiro looked at his reflection in a rain puddle. Who was he? Where was the boy he was back then? [Back when I still had Roxas.] All he saw right now was a lifeless soul. Chiro laughed at the irony. A soul? He didn't even have a heart. [I guess that's what happens when you try to pretend you have one.] You get burned. Chiro's eye lids started to get heavy. Had he always been this sleepy? What's going on? Tired. He was tired. Chiro groaned painfully as sleep started to take over him.
"So..tired…" he cried before he blacked out.
Soon after sleep claimed Chiro a man appeared. He had a scar on his face and brown hair. A woman with long brownish hair and a pink dress of some sort appeared next to him.
"What are you staring at Leon?" she asked. She stared after where he was staring and gasped.
"Oh my." She said as she ran over to where Chiro collapsed. Leon walked up to her.
"How's his condition?" he asked. Aerith checked Chiro's pulse. She sighed in relief.
"He breathing. Thank goodness, but he's not in good shape." She said. Leon looked at her skeptically.
"Aerith. Look at his outfit." He urged her. Aerith looked at Chiro's sleeping form.
"So?" she asked. Leon pointed at Chiro.
"He's an organization member. You can't just take him in. He's a danger." He tried to tell her. Aerith frowned at Leon.
"Leon! He's just a child! You expect me to leave him like this? He can die!" Aerith cried. Leon opened his mouth to say something but Aerith beat him to it.
"He's just a kid. That should be enough to help him." She said. And that was final. Leon sighed. He looked over at the passed out teen and went to pick Chiro up.
"Let's just take him back to Merlin's house to rest him up." Aerith suggested. Leon nodded and carried Chiro off. He was still reluctant to help an organization member but Aerith was right. This was a kid. Leon would be damned if he left a kid out to die. Not that Aerith would ever let him.
Kitty: So yea. Reviews help me update faster and it acts as a motivator! So please review? C:
Kiki: please? 8D BELOW IS A COMMENTARY TO EXPLAIN ERRORS KITTY MADE. PLEASE SKIP IT AND REVIEW IF YOU DON'T LIKE COMMENTARY.
Talking corner: (COMMENTARY!) [This is where I explain my corrections to you. Feel free to skip]
The Plot, the Characters and Storyline:
I gave a lot of thought into Chiro's character and tried to keep it consistent instead of bipolarish as he was in the first version. See first version if you want to see if I improved or… got worse. LOL. And I felt the first chapter was TOO rushed so I added more detail in it so that it didn't look like I was speeding along like I usually was since I wanted this to be a serious story with as little humor/rushing as possible. I'm trying not to rush this story as much as possible. But sometimes I fear that I might loss the sight of my true goal if I dontrush it. So for me to write a story with the intention of making it long it would be hard and I do hope I don't lose track of my original goal.
Chiro's name:
I felt that I needed to change Chiro's name but then that thought left me. I couldn't bring myself to change his name since I was use to it his name gives a sense of innocence to me. That's all it took me to keep his name.
The Fighting sceneand Fragments missing:
Actually I rewrote this quite a few times and even plotted it in my head a few nights before deciding the first version the scene was too rushed and I used the wrong character's names and also spelled things wrong. Then I realized some parts of it didn't make sense at all. As if I didn't explain correctly. In fact even I didn't understand it because of the missing fragments .So I had to go back and add parts which I forgot to include. To he
The Italic thoughts:
I always thought. If Roxas and Sora shared the body and acted as one person, their thought process would be almost the same but still have different thoughts. It's hard to explain and even show it. But I tried so include their thoughts in it. I realized I didn't have this in the last story so I decided to add this to further develop the 'mood'. I wonder if it worked.. If you haven't figure out:
This type is Roxas' thoughts
This type is Sora's thoughts.
And and then later on while Chiro was in darkness you heard two voices in Italics. Obviously they couldn't be Roxas and Sora so now it's Chiro's voice and 'The voice'
[This type was Chiro's thoughts]
This type was the voice.
The Voice:
I really don't know about the voice but I know it's going to have a big role in the story. I don't know when's the appropriate time to place it in the story later but when it comes to that I'll figure it out. Would you readers have any ideas to help me out? One for all and all for one I guess comes into play here xDDD.
I felt that I needed to explain things so I added the commentary. My commentaries will occasionally pop up after the chapter to explain things that might confuse some readers. If you still have any questions I won't hesitate to answer them all so if u're curious you can leave a question in the review bar. You can even be anonymous in ur answer. I don't mind answering to clear ur questions up 8u