How far will you go for her?
Okay after writing Sleeping Beauty and still debating whether to write a sequel.........anyway I decided to make a fresh start, and try something new, just please read and review and enjoy. I again do not own Final Fantasy even though I really wish I did....
P.S.: Okay just a few words to the reviewers that perked my intrest: just an answer to "DUDE", IRIS IS A FLOWER!!!!! AERIS NAMED HER THAT BECAUSE SHE LOVES FLOWERS!!!!! Geez you have no time on your hands if you can go and insult other people's stories, I'm sorry to say
Hey Jennifer, oh I mean Jennifer Gainsbourough, yes I did recieve that E-mail....I'm glad your giving me good reviews....so if you read this I say hi!!!! If I get reviewers like you I most assuredly have written quite a lot of fics before I stop :)
Lena Aerispikacloud, thanks for the also good review, and I'm glad SOME people are smart enough to read that I did not make the story a hentai.....I want to salute you for that funny response you were giving to "Dude".....*salutes*
Liete Ishida, I made your favourite author's list I checked, doing something like that makes writing worth while
Nicky, thanks for your review also I did make a response on the message board.
Thank you to any other reviewers I had sorry this is taking so on to the story:
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CHAPTER 1: Cloud's vision
It is after the battle with Sephroith, the destruction of METEOR but sadly not after the lonliness Cloud Strife beared in his heart. Cloud pondered time and time again the same question over and over in his head or outloud, bringing him to close insanity.
Cloud: Why did out of all the people who had to die, why did it have to be you? You never have to be on this journey with me, but you came anyway.....you never asked for anything but gave up so much.....why?
Cloud asked himself that time and time again, his friends were slowly growing very concern for him and they all tried their best to cheer him up but to no avail. The poor man seemed to stick it in his head that it was his fault that Aeris Gainsborough was dead, sure they all missed her, but for Cloud it was almost like a part of him was ripped out and stepped on, he seemed like he would never be at peace. Well there was one way, but the person who could bring him to peace had to be ALIVE to tell him so it looked like Cloud was going to live the rest of his life in this terrible pain. However things were going to change for Cloud but for the better (hopefully), that night:
Cloud: *praying* Aeris......no matter where I go or what I do, there hasn't been one moment I haven't thought of you, I love you.....WHY DID IT TAKE ME SO LONG TO REALIZE??!! WHY??? YOU COULD HAVE BEEN ALIVE RIGHT NOW, BUT BECAUSE OF MY STUPID MISTAKE, YOUR NOT!!!! AERIS......I'LL DO ANYTHING TO HAVE YOU WITH ME AGAIN....*climbs into bed, but with a heavy heart*
*later*
???: Cloud.....
Cloud: a voice....
???: Cloud.....
Cloud: who's there?
???: I have heard your prayer, you claimed that you love this girl that you will do ANYTHING for her....tell me, is that true?
Cloud: yes, I will do anything.....
???: really? Okay what would you say if you can bring back this friend.....
Cloud: REALLY???!!!
???: absolutely....but you must come alone and also bring enough equipment like food to last for a few days.....you won't be coming back for awhile.....after you've done that go to the alter of the Forgotten Capital.....you should see something REALLY interesting there....
and with that, the voice was gone....Cloud took a split second to ponder on what to do, sure trusting a mysterious voice was probably a VERY stupid thing to do, but if it could bring Aeris back than it would certainly be worth it, right? So after taking a few seconds he decided that he will do it.....he will listen to the voice.
*the next morning....*
Tifa: YOUR GOING TO DO WHAT??!!!
Cloud: you heard me, I had a vision it told me to go to the Forgotten Capital, I believe there might be a chance I can be with Aeris again....
Tifa: Cloud you've gone crazy I'm sorry, I thought that I was right when I told everyone that you were still sane.....I guess I was wrong.....
Cloud: maybe I have gone crazy, so crazy for the love of one woman I'm willing to go through ANYTHING.....
Tifa: well crazy or not come back alive and if you come back with Aeris that would also be an added bonus....
Cloud: thanks for the support Tifa at least your more supportive than everyone else when I told them.....
*flashback*
Barrett: Your pretty $#^%#^@^@^&^%&^%#&^% you know that Spike....
Red13: Cloud, no offense but what you are planning to do defies all known laws even from the Ancients....
Yuffie: YOU HEARD WHAT????!!!!! *laughes for about an hour or so*
Cait/Reeve: riiiiiiight Cloud, you know I have some friends who have a nice white jacket and a good padded room just for you if you need it
Vincent:..............
Cid: WHAT THE $%#%^!%^%^$&!&^%&@^&&%&$%@ THERE IS NO $%@#$^$%@@%&^*&%((@^$@%@#$ WAY YOU CAN DO %^@^%$^$^@^@$%^$ WHAT YOU ARE PLANNING TO DO!!!!
*end flashback*
Cloud: well I'll be seeing you.....*leaves*
Chapter 2: The Introduction to the test of love and as well as a problem
*At the Forgotten Capital*
Cloud: well here I am at the Forgotten Capital.......but what is this so called "Interesting" thing I was going to see?
*just than a BRIALLIANT white light flashes by Cloud*
Cloud: huh?
light: long through the eons that passed, many have lost the ones that they loved. Though only few of the many claimed actually got their lovers back, because to revive a lost love your love must be pure, Cloud you claim that your love for Aeris is pure and you saved the Planet, so therefore we are willing to give you a shot to find Aeris and bring her back to the Planet. Therefore, are you willing?
Cloud: yes, There's nothing that's going to stop me from being with Aeris again.
light: very well, but know this fail our test and you'll NEVER see her again, are you still prepared and ready?
Cloud: well this is a difficult decision, but I have to at least try, even if I don't see her again that is my punishment for failing her, I have to right the wrongs of letting her down
light: very well I shall take you to the place of the test
*the lights emits another light that surrounds Cloud and he disappears*
Cloud: where am I?
*Cloud takes a second to scan his surroundings, he is in an ancient building filled with people and there was an elderly person sitting behind an ancient desk he looks like some sort of judge*
Judge: hello Cloud Strife
Cloud: who are you?
Judge: my name is not important, for I lived eons ago and never left this place in the Promised Land even though I had a choice I maintain the balance of order of life for many living things such as the Cetra race
Cloud: okay, I'm in the Promised Land, it was your voice that I heard wasn't it?
Judge: *nods* yes, I have heard your prayers and I must admit even they touched my heart, in a way that I am willing to give you a chance to bring back your friend. However it's easy to say "I love her" but to actually be strong enough to support those words is another story so you are going to go on an adventure to prove your love for her
Cloud: *smiles for what seems to be the first time* piece of cake
Judge: your pretty confident, I wonder if that will affect your results *waves his hand and a paper appears*
Cloud: What's this?
Judge: it's a map of the area. See those 4 blue markings on the map?
Cloud: yes
Judge: I want you to go to those places first, inside those temples are four tailsments. They are also being gaurded by four elementals of Fire,Water,Earth and Sky and thus are located in their own natual habitats in the Promised Lands
Cloud: what do you mean?
Judge: for example the Fire Elemental will live in someplace hot, the Water someplace wet and so on
Cloud: what do I do after gathering the Tailsments?
Judge: after doing that you can go to the red marked area on your map, there is a temple where you shall face your greatest challenge, and finally after doing that go to the yellow marking to recieve your final test and deem if your worthy.
Cloud: man this doesn't sound like this is going to be easy, but I'm up to the challenge....
Judge: your going to to freeze and fry the very first moments you are out in the Promised Land your going to need a guide, to help show you around and help you with your tasks, trust me your going to need the help.....Sirea come here, there is something I would like you to do for me
*Sirea a young woman steps foward*
Cloud: look, I don't need anyone's.......*looks at Sirea* help...
when Cloud looked at her he was ABSOLUTELY stunned, she was a beautiful gorgous woman in her early twenties with long blond hair and pieceing blue eyes, Cloud "scanned" her from the legs up to her pretty face, he was absolutly breathless
Cloud: (wow, she's just as beautiful as Aeris.......WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING??!!! NO keep focused on Aeris.....)
Sirea: hello, you must be Cloud, I'm Sirea......
Cloud: p-p-please to meet you.....*shakes her hand*
Judge: Sirea is a powerful magic user as well as hand to hand fighter she'll be great help in your cause
Sirea: well I'll meet you outside and we can get started......I can tell you right now the tasks are going to be long and hard so I hope you're up to it *walks outside*
Cloud: (I think after this is done, I'm going to need a cold shower)
Judge: so Cloud what are you waiting for? Your tests await.....
Cloud: *shakes himself out of daze* oh yeah right......I better go *leaves also*
Judge: *sigh*, I don't think he is ready but only time can tell that if he is
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
That was the first parts of the story I have all planned out, if I get enough good reviews I'll write more of the continuation if I don't I'll write a sequel for Sleeping Beauty so either way I write something :)
Okay after writing Sleeping Beauty and still debating whether to write a sequel.........anyway I decided to make a fresh start, and try something new, just please read and review and enjoy. I again do not own Final Fantasy even though I really wish I did....
P.S.: Okay just a few words to the reviewers that perked my intrest: just an answer to "DUDE", IRIS IS A FLOWER!!!!! AERIS NAMED HER THAT BECAUSE SHE LOVES FLOWERS!!!!! Geez you have no time on your hands if you can go and insult other people's stories, I'm sorry to say
Hey Jennifer, oh I mean Jennifer Gainsbourough, yes I did recieve that E-mail....I'm glad your giving me good reviews....so if you read this I say hi!!!! If I get reviewers like you I most assuredly have written quite a lot of fics before I stop :)
Lena Aerispikacloud, thanks for the also good review, and I'm glad SOME people are smart enough to read that I did not make the story a hentai.....I want to salute you for that funny response you were giving to "Dude".....*salutes*
Liete Ishida, I made your favourite author's list I checked, doing something like that makes writing worth while
Nicky, thanks for your review also I did make a response on the message board.
Thank you to any other reviewers I had sorry this is taking so on to the story:
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
CHAPTER 1: Cloud's vision
It is after the battle with Sephroith, the destruction of METEOR but sadly not after the lonliness Cloud Strife beared in his heart. Cloud pondered time and time again the same question over and over in his head or outloud, bringing him to close insanity.
Cloud: Why did out of all the people who had to die, why did it have to be you? You never have to be on this journey with me, but you came anyway.....you never asked for anything but gave up so much.....why?
Cloud asked himself that time and time again, his friends were slowly growing very concern for him and they all tried their best to cheer him up but to no avail. The poor man seemed to stick it in his head that it was his fault that Aeris Gainsborough was dead, sure they all missed her, but for Cloud it was almost like a part of him was ripped out and stepped on, he seemed like he would never be at peace. Well there was one way, but the person who could bring him to peace had to be ALIVE to tell him so it looked like Cloud was going to live the rest of his life in this terrible pain. However things were going to change for Cloud but for the better (hopefully), that night:
Cloud: *praying* Aeris......no matter where I go or what I do, there hasn't been one moment I haven't thought of you, I love you.....WHY DID IT TAKE ME SO LONG TO REALIZE??!! WHY??? YOU COULD HAVE BEEN ALIVE RIGHT NOW, BUT BECAUSE OF MY STUPID MISTAKE, YOUR NOT!!!! AERIS......I'LL DO ANYTHING TO HAVE YOU WITH ME AGAIN....*climbs into bed, but with a heavy heart*
*later*
???: Cloud.....
Cloud: a voice....
???: Cloud.....
Cloud: who's there?
???: I have heard your prayer, you claimed that you love this girl that you will do ANYTHING for her....tell me, is that true?
Cloud: yes, I will do anything.....
???: really? Okay what would you say if you can bring back this friend.....
Cloud: REALLY???!!!
???: absolutely....but you must come alone and also bring enough equipment like food to last for a few days.....you won't be coming back for awhile.....after you've done that go to the alter of the Forgotten Capital.....you should see something REALLY interesting there....
and with that, the voice was gone....Cloud took a split second to ponder on what to do, sure trusting a mysterious voice was probably a VERY stupid thing to do, but if it could bring Aeris back than it would certainly be worth it, right? So after taking a few seconds he decided that he will do it.....he will listen to the voice.
*the next morning....*
Tifa: YOUR GOING TO DO WHAT??!!!
Cloud: you heard me, I had a vision it told me to go to the Forgotten Capital, I believe there might be a chance I can be with Aeris again....
Tifa: Cloud you've gone crazy I'm sorry, I thought that I was right when I told everyone that you were still sane.....I guess I was wrong.....
Cloud: maybe I have gone crazy, so crazy for the love of one woman I'm willing to go through ANYTHING.....
Tifa: well crazy or not come back alive and if you come back with Aeris that would also be an added bonus....
Cloud: thanks for the support Tifa at least your more supportive than everyone else when I told them.....
*flashback*
Barrett: Your pretty $#^%#^@^@^&^%&^%#&^% you know that Spike....
Red13: Cloud, no offense but what you are planning to do defies all known laws even from the Ancients....
Yuffie: YOU HEARD WHAT????!!!!! *laughes for about an hour or so*
Cait/Reeve: riiiiiiight Cloud, you know I have some friends who have a nice white jacket and a good padded room just for you if you need it
Vincent:..............
Cid: WHAT THE $%#%^!%^%^$&!&^%&@^&&%&$%@ THERE IS NO $%@#$^$%@@%&^*&%((@^$@%@#$ WAY YOU CAN DO %^@^%$^$^@^@$%^$ WHAT YOU ARE PLANNING TO DO!!!!
*end flashback*
Cloud: well I'll be seeing you.....*leaves*
Chapter 2: The Introduction to the test of love and as well as a problem
*At the Forgotten Capital*
Cloud: well here I am at the Forgotten Capital.......but what is this so called "Interesting" thing I was going to see?
*just than a BRIALLIANT white light flashes by Cloud*
Cloud: huh?
light: long through the eons that passed, many have lost the ones that they loved. Though only few of the many claimed actually got their lovers back, because to revive a lost love your love must be pure, Cloud you claim that your love for Aeris is pure and you saved the Planet, so therefore we are willing to give you a shot to find Aeris and bring her back to the Planet. Therefore, are you willing?
Cloud: yes, There's nothing that's going to stop me from being with Aeris again.
light: very well, but know this fail our test and you'll NEVER see her again, are you still prepared and ready?
Cloud: well this is a difficult decision, but I have to at least try, even if I don't see her again that is my punishment for failing her, I have to right the wrongs of letting her down
light: very well I shall take you to the place of the test
*the lights emits another light that surrounds Cloud and he disappears*
Cloud: where am I?
*Cloud takes a second to scan his surroundings, he is in an ancient building filled with people and there was an elderly person sitting behind an ancient desk he looks like some sort of judge*
Judge: hello Cloud Strife
Cloud: who are you?
Judge: my name is not important, for I lived eons ago and never left this place in the Promised Land even though I had a choice I maintain the balance of order of life for many living things such as the Cetra race
Cloud: okay, I'm in the Promised Land, it was your voice that I heard wasn't it?
Judge: *nods* yes, I have heard your prayers and I must admit even they touched my heart, in a way that I am willing to give you a chance to bring back your friend. However it's easy to say "I love her" but to actually be strong enough to support those words is another story so you are going to go on an adventure to prove your love for her
Cloud: *smiles for what seems to be the first time* piece of cake
Judge: your pretty confident, I wonder if that will affect your results *waves his hand and a paper appears*
Cloud: What's this?
Judge: it's a map of the area. See those 4 blue markings on the map?
Cloud: yes
Judge: I want you to go to those places first, inside those temples are four tailsments. They are also being gaurded by four elementals of Fire,Water,Earth and Sky and thus are located in their own natual habitats in the Promised Lands
Cloud: what do you mean?
Judge: for example the Fire Elemental will live in someplace hot, the Water someplace wet and so on
Cloud: what do I do after gathering the Tailsments?
Judge: after doing that you can go to the red marked area on your map, there is a temple where you shall face your greatest challenge, and finally after doing that go to the yellow marking to recieve your final test and deem if your worthy.
Cloud: man this doesn't sound like this is going to be easy, but I'm up to the challenge....
Judge: your going to to freeze and fry the very first moments you are out in the Promised Land your going to need a guide, to help show you around and help you with your tasks, trust me your going to need the help.....Sirea come here, there is something I would like you to do for me
*Sirea a young woman steps foward*
Cloud: look, I don't need anyone's.......*looks at Sirea* help...
when Cloud looked at her he was ABSOLUTELY stunned, she was a beautiful gorgous woman in her early twenties with long blond hair and pieceing blue eyes, Cloud "scanned" her from the legs up to her pretty face, he was absolutly breathless
Cloud: (wow, she's just as beautiful as Aeris.......WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING??!!! NO keep focused on Aeris.....)
Sirea: hello, you must be Cloud, I'm Sirea......
Cloud: p-p-please to meet you.....*shakes her hand*
Judge: Sirea is a powerful magic user as well as hand to hand fighter she'll be great help in your cause
Sirea: well I'll meet you outside and we can get started......I can tell you right now the tasks are going to be long and hard so I hope you're up to it *walks outside*
Cloud: (I think after this is done, I'm going to need a cold shower)
Judge: so Cloud what are you waiting for? Your tests await.....
Cloud: *shakes himself out of daze* oh yeah right......I better go *leaves also*
Judge: *sigh*, I don't think he is ready but only time can tell that if he is
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
That was the first parts of the story I have all planned out, if I get enough good reviews I'll write more of the continuation if I don't I'll write a sequel for Sleeping Beauty so either way I write something :)
