Hey, this is my new story idea. Please let me know what you think, even if you don't like it. If I can get more and more reviews, I might update quicker. Oh, I came up with this a long time ago, I just now started to decide to post it. I don't know why. Here we go. Chapter 1!
Tris' POV
After my attackers (Drew, Peter, and Al) were on the floor in a bloody mess, I saw my savior: Eric? I was lifted off the floor, and I saw the answering tattoos. "Eric?" I whimpered, and Eric's face came into view. "Tris." He said, stopping his walking to clutch onto me. "Are you okay?" Eric asked, walking again. "Barely alive, so I'm peachy. Why'd you save me? I thought you hated me?" I said, and Eric chuckled. "I don't hate you, Tris. You've known that, haven't you seen the looks I've given you? Tris, Beatrice, I have a crush on you." Eric said, and I giggled. I've had a crush on Eric since I met him two years ago, on tehe roof with my Dad, Max. "Me too." I whispered in his ear, my face bright red. The tips of Eric's ears went red, as he stroked my cheeks. I smiled up at Eric, before I kissed my favorite Dauntless leader, feeling fireworks against my lips. We pulled apart to breathe, then kissed again, whilst Ericbrought us to his bedroom, kissing the whole way. In the distance you could hear Billy (Eric's best friend) scream, and punching/breaking a computer screen.
Billy's POV
I can't belive that bastard ERIC! He knows I'm in the control room, and that I have a HUGE crush on Tris. Then they kiss! I'll let Max know, and then they're done!
Okay, that's my idea. I know it sucks, but let me know what you think. Review and I'll make more.