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First Fiction...
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BPOV
Edward and I went to the door of Renesmee's bedroom to wish her goodnight. We could hear the music which came from her room; it was a composition by Debussy. She was very nervous; she used to listen to classical music when some thoughts tormented her mind, as her father did. But we didn't need that to understand why she was so thoughtful. Tomorrow would be the very first day of school of her life.
Even if she was very smart and her unending will to be stimulated in new subjects was astonishing, until today her only teachers were Edward and I. For that we had decided together with her and the rest of the Cullen, that this year she would attend the high school in this new city. Now that her incredible growth had stopped she could have real human friends without arousing suspicion, and she could have more experience in the human world.
Edward looked at me with those wonderful eyes, I nodded and he knocked the door.
"Can we?" he asked softly.
I heard Renesmee turn off the stereo and say"yes, come in".
Edward opened the door and saw Renesmee lying on her bed.
7 years have passed too quickly, and my little daughter was no longer little. Her physical appearance was like that of a teenager, she had a perfect and well proportioned body, marvellous long bronze hair and deep brown eyes. She was beautiful. But I really didn't expect anything less, not when her father was as handsome as a Greek god.
I turned my eyes on Edward, who was caressing her cheek.
Mmmm, no. Better than a Greek god.
More beautiful and sexier than a Greek god.
I sat on the end of her bed while Edward was kneeling next to her face. She looked at him with a preoccupied smile on her face.
"Darling, don't be scared for tomorrow! You'll be great and you'll make some new friends!" I assured her.
She took me by the hand, so I could listen to all her doubts, as Edward could already do.
Her thoughts were full of questions.
What if I'll do something wrong? What if they don't like me? What if I forget to control my gift and I touch someone showing them my thoughts?.
I could hear her heartbeat accelerate.
I was so proud of my little grumbler and I could not tolerate the idea of her suffering for such a little thing like that.
Edward agreed with my thoughts, indeed when she began to shake her head he replied "Sweetie, you have done so well all this time with your grandpa Charlie and all the human friends we had!" I smiled to encourage her. "Don't be afraid! Every member of our family loves you, and everyone you have known has the same feelings that we have". Indeed Edward was right, she had been the glue which helped our family and the werewolves live in peace and even become friends.
Her thoughts were still doubtful.
"Nessie" Edward said gently, I soon understood he had decided to reveal our surprise to her as soon as possible he looked at me and I nodded, then he turned his look to Renesmee. "Your mother and I are sure you'll be perfect. But we even know that you don't like the idea that you won't go at the same high school that we do" then, resigned, he added "So we decided that Jacob will come in class with you. So you'll have a friend with you". Her eyes opened wide. He smiled at her, knowing we made her happy.
Indeed, she was. "Really?" she was practically yelling. "So that was the secret Jacob didn't want me to know?" Now she was jumping on her bed.
Edward took me by the hand, his expression revealed satisfaction and happiness. I was happy and impressed that Jacob withstood the siege that Renesmee certainly had done on him all the day. He never resisted her requests.
"Thank you so much mum and dad! Now I know, tomorrow will be perfect!" she said and began to hug us. I could smell her sweet scent while I was hugging her in response to her enthusiasm and I winked at Edward for the excitement of our daughter.
"Ok, ok" I said, "now it's time to sleep! Tomorrow we have school!" my enthusiasm abated at the end of the phrase. I perceived Edward tighten grip. He knew what I was thinking.
"Good night Renesmee" we both said.
"Good night to you!" she replied trying to conceal the excitement.
Edward closed the door and I looked his marvellous face, which was facing me. I knew what he was thinking; probably my own thoughts were passing by even his mind. He was relaxed about Renesmee, we were certain she would be perfect and we also knew she would be safe, because Jacob would be with her all the time.
I was still admiring his golden eyes when I perceived his expression change.
From quiet to lust.
We both knew that the next day we would have to stay far from each other for all the time of lessons, and we didn't intend to waste our time.
He embraced me and his lips met mine in a growl, my hands were in his hair, I could taste his delightful flavour on my tongue. He raised me up and, without stopping the kiss, he brought me upstairs as far as possible. As we reached our bedroom the frenzy overwhelmed him.
He pushed me up against the wall, which trembled a little around me.
If I hadn't been concentrating so much on him I could have heard the painting next to me collapse, or the lamp, hanging on the middle of the ceiling, fall, or Renesmee, from her bedroom downstairs, sneering and urging us to be less impetuous.
We both smiled for a second and then returned to our kiss.
His hands were tight to my abdomen, pressing me against the wall. Our lips were burning, together with eagerness.
His mouth began to descend to my chin, and down along my neck and collarbone. My hands moved enthusiastically from his bronze hair to his magnificent, sculptured chest, I could feel his perfect body even under his shirt.
"I love your blouses" he whispered and in a fluid move all my buttons were bouncing on the floor and my blouse were totally ruined. He had torn it.
"Me too" I said him and had the same regard for his shirt he had for mine.
"Bella, my Bella" he sighed and returned to my lips.
I couldn't say anything; my desire for him was too strong to let me do something different from kissing him or hugging me to him.
"Love, I want you" he whispered, his voice was seductive and husky.
"I need you" I replied trembling.
Edward lifted me up and brought me to our bed.
It was the dawn, Edward and I were lying on our bed listening our own breath slacken. We were hugging when the first ray of light came through the window making our bare bodies sparkle.
His eyes were fixed on mine when he began caressing my face, my cheek, my chin with his right hand. His touch was simply delightful.
He turned his look to my mouth, sighed and let his hand go down my neck. Slowly he reached my collarbone, and continued to slip down along my body, between my breasts and in a very slow seductive movement and reached my stomach. His medium finger stopped for a moment on my navel.
My efforts on slowing down my breaths failed, I could never resist his touch.
His eyes followed his hand and when he reached my hips, he turned his face and looked at me.
I was staring at his face and I noticed his golden eyes glowed with admiration, satisfaction and desire.
The same things my eyes were showing to him.
Edward took my face between his hands, delicately lowered his face on mine and kissed my lips with infinite sweetness.
When he let us breath, "Bella" he whispered. And with his charming voice said "I cannot find the appropriate words to say to you how beautiful you are to me". He seemed to be very sorry and resigned for that.
"If you want I can help you" I said and smiled at him.
"How?" he frowned "It doesn't exist a word enough great to contain all your beauty".
I caressed his cheeks and then let my left hand go into his gorgeous bronze hair.
"You can show me" I answered. To make myself clearer for him I let him read my mind. Your smiles, your caresses, your kisses, your moans and groans are the best words you can use to unveil me what you think about me. He smiled and a growl came from his throat before starting to kiss me with passion. Listening to my thoughts always made him going crazy.
His eyes were in flame when he stopped the kiss and replied to me "So, I have to engage myself more than usual", his voice were low, "I want my wife to know exactly what I mean. She deserves to know how breathtaking" he bit my earlobe, "and gorgeous" he kissed my jaw and let his mouth slip until he reached my chin "and irresistible she is".
He hovered over me and kissed my lips in adornment. We couldn't resist any longer.
All at once Edward moved away his mouth from mine and murmured with rage "Oh my God! Not that, no, please!"
"What's the problem Edward?" I asked anxiously. But before I could worry about his reaction I heard the sound of a vampire walk in the proximity of our garden.
"Alice" we both exhaled. The difference between our answers was that I pronounced her name as a justification, and him, like an injury.
"She's come to give you her instructions for your 'school' clothes. She saw what you planned for today." Edward explained. He was as annoyed as I was
I really loved my best friend Alice, but sometimes she appeared at the wrong moment. Times like this one.
"Alice, go away, leave us alone" I prayed her, my voice was loud enough to be heard by her "I don't need your help on get dressed".
"Yes, you do" she replied. "I'll never let my sister wear those ugly pants you have planned! And the shirt you are going to choose is simply horrible. If you really love me you won't let those atrocious pants torture my eyes".
I was not giving her much attention. Edward's lips had returned to my neck.
"Bella" cried loud Alice in her crystalline voice.
"Alice, leave the clothes you brought for me at the door and leave us alone!" Asked of her.
"No, I cannot. And I want to see Renesmee before the others do"
"Alice please!" growled Edward at his sister.
"No, Edward, I won't give up! My help to Bella is a mission!" Edward and I turned up our eyes simultaneously.
"And I also think you should stop it and continue tonight. I have come also because I saw that if I hadn't, you'd lose your first day of school. So STOP! I can assure you, you'll tear Emmett and Roses' record!" I smiled at this idea.
"Edward you know it's the truth, so let me come in, Nessie's going to be awake in 1 minute and 32 seconds" she added, knowing she had won the battle.
Edward looked at me resigned "tonight" he said.
I nodded "Of course, you are in debt to me of that explanation…" I could still see the desire on his bright eyes.