Akira: Hello, little authoresses note here. Considering this is one of my very first stories that I am posting up here, besides 'An Old Story of Something' which is also in progress, I'd like to give you a heads up that might help w/ their progress….I am currently trying very hard to get the chapters for these things out, but am becoming distracted by the fact that, in my rush, I somehow managed to accidentally end up making them sound like Mary-sues. I apologize. In my head while I was trying to figure this out, they didn't seem like sues. I was in a big rush the day I was typing this, as well as the day it was posted. Taken account to this apology, I also have a request…Do not use the precious review time to tell me that they are Sue's, I've already got 2 of them telling me this and am working' on it! Jus' tell me what I should work on and I'll try to make the changes!
Disclaimer:Don't own Naruto, if I did I'd be rich.
Ch. 1: Say Hello!
Name: Shuri Tanaki Age: 14
Height: "4, 9" (not short) Race: human (but, she& her sis have wolf demons in them, like Naruto. she is not as hyperactive as they are though.)
Description: She's a tomboy, and has a hard time making friends; she is responsible and very smart. She has a goddess-like figure, but hates showing it off, has deep black hair w/ blue & red highlights in it, and greenish- blue eyes that can see the future. Her hair is short and very choppy. She wears either baggy Capri's or cargo pants, and is usually seen wearing either a baggy t-shirt or a halter top that stops above her belly button with a black fishnet shirt covering it with matching gloves. The cloths usually consist of black, blue, purple, or a combination.
Hobbies: she likes to train a lot, um, sketching, sleeping, and playing pranks, pissing off Sauske, sleeping, cooking, and is sort of a loner.
Likes: Her twin sis, curry ramen, scary movies, creeping out Sakura, Meeka (her demon), bugs, animals, and some other stuff.
Hates: Sauske Uchiha, fan ppl (boys & girls both), Sakura& Ino, ppl who confuse her w/ her sis, ppl who beat up her fam/ frnds, anyone who touches her stuff, ppl that wake her from a nap, and a LOT of other stuff.
Techniques: She and her sis are the last remaining people in their family, like sauske, but they don't go about wasting their time plotting revenge on the ones responsible. They have mastered taijutsu and genjutsu, along with another kind that had been passed down to them before their parents were killed, but they can't control that one so well. It is a special technique that combines the elements with psychic energy, and is virtually unbeatable in combat. They are also familiar with many kinds of weapons, but she prefers the larger kind and katanas. Their clan was well known for having remarkably large amounts of chakra, and being able to use it as weapons in battle.
Family: Her twin sis Shira, Naruto their 'adopted' brother, and Riku their pet wolf. Riku is sort of like her version of Akamaru, but just a tad bit bigger, though still able to fit into one of he r many pockets, and does that little 'growth spurt' thing too. Shira is the same as Shuri, but she wears light cloths instead of dark, to put it frank, they're t he same in everything except for personalities (she's more girlish)and interests in style. And she has silverish hair instead of black, and red & black highlights.
Akira: So? How do you guys like em', huh? I really wanna know what u guys think of this so I know if I haft a' change it or not. I don't really know what else to say here….but u guys know what to do! Now hit the review button!*points*
Shuri:*points*
Shira:*points*
Riku:*points*