Please bear with me this is my first fanfiction.

MAX POV

The flock and I were flying over New York when Nudge asked me to get some food, go shopping, get a cell phone, go to Paris, give a makeover to Angel, give a makeover to Fang, get a dog, get a cat, get a hamster, and get a ferret. So, after all those options...we decided to stop on a McDonald's roof and sent Fang to get some food. Then I saw it. A huge black horse in the parking lot. But there was a catch. It had wings on its back.

I ran as fast as I could toward the edge of the roof and I heard Nico say "Whaaaaaaaaaaaa? as I jumped off it. As I fell to the ground I shouted at the guy standing in the parking lot.

"Why the *insert swear word of you choice* does your horse have wings? I said angrily. "Lookie-Loo another stinking half-blood! over here Percy!"

"Hey Nico." A kid around his age said to him casually. He had sea green eyes and jet black hair that seemed to go well with his camp half-blood t-shirt and blue jeans. Right about the same time Fang stepped out of the McDonald's door. When he saw the horse, he gasped, dropped all the food, spilled the drinks and crushed the hamburgers and French Fries. Gazzy was heartbroken. As the food was dropping, Gazzy seemed to move in slow motion, like an instant replay on TV.

"Noooooooooooooooo!" he seemed to say in a slow low voice as he dove toward the food trying to catch it.

"Why! Why did Fang have to drop you?" Gazzy painfully cried to the food. "You were going to be the only good meal I had in weeks!

I looked back to the boys.

"Who's that girl?"I heard weird kid 1 whisper to weird kid 2.

"Someone who sees your horse...and is waiting for an explanation." he whispered back.

"Do you know about all the Greek gods and stuff?"weird kid 1 asked."Yeah I know all the gods and creatures."Good that's half the battle.

Well basically he explained to me that the flock and I were demigods and that we should get to camp. said were it was. And then we took off.

"Where are we going max?"Angel asked me.

"To some place called camp half-blood."

"Hey I heard about that place! It has mountain climbing and sword fighting and tournaments and 'Capture the Flag' and it's where demigods go. Isn't that aw-"

Iggy clamped his hand over her mouth "Stop Nudge your making my ears bleed!" Iggy complained and we took off.

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"Here we are camp half-blood!" I was eyeing weird kid 1 who was waiting for us."Alright get your group to try to walk through the gate. You make it you're a half-blood and belong here if you don't you aren't a half-blood." He explained.

I went through first and made it then Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, and Angel."Alright we're through now what."I said in a complained tone.

"You go see Chiron." He said simply and pointed to the large white building.

I hate the color white.

We went to what they called the big house and went saw some weird guy with a beard in a wheelchair.

"Who are you?"I asked. While thinking of ways to take him out if things get bad. He interrupted my thoughts when he replied."Why I'm the camp counselor my names I ask what your name is?"

"Maximum Ride."I stated.

"Hmmm I suppose Percy sent should probably sit in those chairs and wait for your godly parent to claim you."

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