Okay, this is my first Fanfiction. I actually enjoy CONSTUCTIVE critisism. Please note that constructive critisism IS: "You spelled something wrong, I don't think this word fits here, or your spelling is wrong." Constructive critisism IS NOT "Oh this story sucks, This story is horrible and i hate it, nor is it OMG, your writing is completely horrible!" I really don't like just critisism. If i make a character too OOC, then please let me know if you review. The first chapter is short, I know, but it's the first one so you really can't blame me.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto, nor any of its characters. I only own my plot and my other character.
CHAPTER 1: The Ride There
After packing their bags and loading them into the car (not sure if they have cars in the ninja world but oh well), the four squad seven members piled in. Kakashi was in the front, Naruto was on the right side, Sakura on the left, and Sasuke in between them. For the first fourth of their two hour drive, everybody was dead silent. A few more minutes passed and Naruto started babbling on about the Chuunin exams. Sakura, unable to pass the Chuunin exams, became very interested in the floor, as she was a bit embarrassed about it. Sasuke, simply annoyed with Naruto's voice, sank into his seat.
A sigh was emitted from Sasuke after 10 minutes of rehearing the Chuunin exams, Naruto somehow changed the subject to Ramen. Sakura, talking over Naruto, started babbling to Sasuke about nonsense. Sasuke put on a 'very pissed' look. Kakashi looked into the rear view mirro. He smiled as he saw Sasuke's 'help me!' face as Sakura wrapped her arms around his neck. This went on for the last hour of the trip. When they arrived, Sasuke tore away from Sakura's grasp and jumped out the side door. He didn't put a seatbelt on, or… he didn't really need one with Sakura smothering him.
They walked up to a house, big enough for all of them to have their own space, yet small enough not to draw too much attention. After about 20 minutes bringing all of their bags in, Naruto brought at least 3 of his full of Ramen and other things Sakura and Sasuke had no inttention of finding out, they each picked a room and settled in. Kakashi, of course, took the biggest on in the house, and Naruto picked the second biggest, he needed all the room for his unknown things in his bags, Sasuke chose the smallest one, claiming that Sakura shouldn't be cramped up in the smallest room of the house. Sakura smiled when he said this and put her arms around his neck. He scowled. Sakura plopped onto the bed of her new room. Sasuke brought his two bags into his room, and sat on his bed. Naruto, was already busy taking his things out of his bags and piling them everywhere in the room he was in. He grinned as he looked around when he was done. All of his Ramen was in one corner, the bed in another, an empty corner that he was sure to fill up with suveniers, and a corner where the door was.
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